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So. D: Have to wonder...was this at all influenced by For Your Eyes Only? Don't misunderstand me, it's outrageously adorable. Naruto following Sasuke around all day? Horrendously cute. I'm actually backing this up to my computer in the event that you pull it, because this one chapter is better than none. I love the start. Sasuke, Neji, and Kiba in agreement? My heart sings. Keep it up absolutely. The begining just reminded me a lot of Shiro-sama's FYEO. The noises Naruto was making especially... Delightful, all the same.

I love the way this is written! please update as soon as possible ^^

Oh...You have so caught my interest. I can't wait to see how this story develops. I looks forward to chapter 2.

Finally, someone who knows the difference between 'then' and 'than'. Nice work this is a lot of fun to read.

Thank you so very much for the extra long chapter! Chouji's flour feasting was hysterical and so was having Sakura's hair caught in Naruto's zipper! I think it was a great choice to have Sakura as a bunny and Ino as a white Persian cat. Both animals fit their personality exactly! Great plot going on (not to mention the heated ending) and can't wait for the next installment!

wow thanks for the update! *genuine*
... and thanks for the cliffhanger... *sarcasm*

agggh!! you like to torture readers for your own sadistic pleasures...
hope to see more from you soon. i really do like your writing style.. it's refreshing from all those other stories out there.
update soon.

Yes! and update.
You totally rock.
I can definetly imagine chouji doing that.
Sasuke, you dog! Could this chapter ending be what I think it is?
Go get 'em tiger!
Cant wait till next update! ^__^

Finally! something took the damn decision out of Sasuke's hands. You just know that if it were any other situation he would be the most repressed animal in existence and making everyone miserable!

I hope he gets some. It may help his disposition, you know?

*glomps*
Aww..... they're just too cute!!!and while I can't complain about your choice and reasoning for Chouji I would have to say wolverine wouldn't have been my first pick. They are definitely *not* the nicest out of the weasel family, having (along with badgers) some of the worst general attitude problems I've heard about. But, they are tremendously strong and good eaters, so I will happily ignore the other tidbit. *winks* And good picks for Ino and Sakura and all the others.
I also like how you're approaching the "in heat" thing and how the scent is affecting nearly everyone that gets near poor Naruto. It's very reasonable and I can just see Sasuke going *pounce* .
Anyways, would love to see more and will be keeping an eye out. Best of luck!!

Oh my gosh, an update! You have no idea how happy this makes me! Naruto is too cute, and Sasuke...well he is just being Sasuke, but still cute at the same time. I too have been suffering under the loss of For Your Eyes Only, but this fic certainly helps alleviate some of the sadness. Can't wait until chapter three!