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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That pic did help, so cute!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is ok to take your time. I would rather that than something that is rushed.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just have a quick question for you - are they cat-cats... like... just normal cats, or are they humanoid animals? In some of the chapters you switch off and on to me. Like one moment they'll have hands and then you say paws... O.o... And then in the bathtub scene they had skin like a human.. O.o
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story this is probably my favorite story, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im very much in love with this story :D please doooo continue very, VERY sooon.
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and your a/ns in each chapter. Eureka! lol That makes me giggle like you thinking of Sasuke preening his tail...:D
Characterization feedback...well, I really think you're close to the characters. Naruto is just SO adorably innocent and so forgiving. I wish Sasuke wasn't so mean to him but he is in the anime so it works perfectly! Don't change the meanness until you absolutely HAVE to. I love Naruto being hurt...makes me get mad and then I throw a fit and cry for Naruto. ...Then I write my own story full of angst with a happy ending lol
I love your story! The way you write makes me FEEL like a part of their lives. I love the idea you have for each of them, as well. Persians, moths, koalas!!! I love Koalas! I'm naming one of my kids Panda and/or Koala. Which is lame but whatevs! Anyways, back to characters. I love the way you write each character. :D Please don't change any part of your story (except adding more chapters...you can change the length ALL you want!)
So yeah...ta ta!
Shivawn Angel
Characterization feedback...well, I really think you're close to the characters. Naruto is just SO adorably innocent and so forgiving. I wish Sasuke wasn't so mean to him but he is in the anime so it works perfectly! Don't change the meanness until you absolutely HAVE to. I love Naruto being hurt...makes me get mad and then I throw a fit and cry for Naruto. ...Then I write my own story full of angst with a happy ending lol
I love your story! The way you write makes me FEEL like a part of their lives. I love the idea you have for each of them, as well. Persians, moths, koalas!!! I love Koalas! I'm naming one of my kids Panda and/or Koala. Which is lame but whatevs! Anyways, back to characters. I love the way you write each character. :D Please don't change any part of your story (except adding more chapters...you can change the length ALL you want!)
So yeah...ta ta!
Shivawn Angel
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
QUESTION!! how big are the animals? 'cuz im a little confused. Kakashi and Iruka can hold them like real animals but the discription you give of naruto and sasuke make them seem normal size. also, do they whare cloths? just some little things that arent cleer to me. LOVE the story so far. its not offten that you see a Sasuke Neji rivlery.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's very cute and I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. ~SangoStar
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay yay yayz!!
Competition into the mix!
This is gonna be so much fun!!
Violent war for love is always fun to watch!!
Otanoshimimasu! (I look forward to it!)
Competition into the mix!
This is gonna be so much fun!!
Violent war for love is always fun to watch!!
Otanoshimimasu! (I look forward to it!)
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind a little reaction between Neji and Naruto but I want Sasuke to have Naruto...:P Good stuff so far...:)