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for Cat's Tales (Chapter 5 up!)

by Elli

schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you have all the characters nailed down to a T! although Iruka does seem alot more troubled here..haha but he does have a lot to be troubled about! This fic totally rules hun! And I cant wait for the next update!
person hisoka
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn he needs to understand whats goin on so does sasuke before all hell breaks loose. hope you can update soon
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry ^^; I'm still getting used to this website...

My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com

I love how you have written Chouji :D And all the others but I have to say Chouji is my favourite non-main character XD
person tash1021
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow please continue
person littleolmee
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, fun chapter.

Liked the antagonistic ways Kakashi gives Iruka information. It really does make you wonder why Iruka has so many pets if he doesn't know everything about them, I'm sure this info will be brought up later on.

I just wonder how dinner will turn out with all these pets, their personality quarks, Iruka and Kakashi, the brewing fight between Sasuke and Neji, and of course Naruto and his changing place in the house. This next chapter should be very funny with all that and the developing story going on in it. I really look forward to it.

Naruto has turned out innocent and but still carries those same qualities as young Naruto from the anime. Kitty Sasuke comes across like young Sasuke from the anime; still coming to terms about how he feels about having emotions more than he want to have towards Naruto. So that's the characterization that has come across to me. Neji comes across as just out for himself right now but you said he will develop more so I look forward to that.

Well keep up the good work, thanks again and take care.

littleolmee
person charmpit
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG Sasuke vs. Neji and the prize is Naruto's virgin ass! I can't stand it!!!!

Chapter four was by far the funniest one yet. And that's saying something; this whole story is delightfully humorous.

You ask about characterization. Well, if I didn't already understand Hatake Kakashi from the canon I would not have been able to get a bead on him so far. Conversely, if I didn't already understand Umino Iruka from the canon then you have aptly introduced me to him via his characterization here. Kakashi should be fleshed out more, but I'm sure you were already planning to do that.

I love this fic and am looking forward to future chapters with great enthusiasm. I am particularly interested to read the evolution of the interrelationship between Iruka and Kakashi from where it is now to a true KakaIru (or IruKaka, I don't care), since you have graciously decided that it's a go. Thank you for that!!!!

Next chapter!
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I LOVE this fic!

Hehe, I can so see Neji as a simaese! He's got the purrrrfect attitude for it.

Question; Are the sand sibs gonna appear at any point? 'Coz you know you gotta make Gaara a racoon and Kankuro a cat, right? Dunno what Temari would be though...

Once again, great story! Keep writing!
person rainbow00
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your portrayal of the characters! I also adore naruto and his complete obliviousness towards his problem..its really cute, I also like how sasuke is jealous and possessive. can't wait to read more!!!! :)
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Wow, I just started reading this story..and already I'm in love with it..

If I have time, I'll draw fanart =]
person Cheekyaericangrl211
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0w0 I'm a huge fan of this story now!! I started reading it a week ago, and you should see me coming back from school
"did she update???no??? craaaap." TT-TT so I was all, YEA!! RAINBOWS AND SUNSHINE when I saw you had updated!! :3 when do you normally, btw-so I don't go all like, emo chick on people!! continue with the story!! it's getting fascinating :3