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I LOVE your story!!! I hope you've got some more chapters to come it's only starting to get interesting!! :oD

Hey! Thanx for adding me on alert X3
Wow, Sasuke losing self control...
THen again... He is part beast with instinct.
Hehehe... I'm quite interested how this will turn out :D

Oh, btw... I seem to be caught in a mystery to how you have obtained my e-mail...
Not that I don't want to be alerted...
I'm just curious... because I don't think I left a email on my last review...?

I'm greatful! I'm very greatful! Awesome chapter. Poor Sasuke he had his Naruto snatched away just as he was going to have some fun. I can't wait to find out more about the whole demon thing.
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this looks to really cute - keep it up - i'd love to see how this ends!
love shikamaru as a koala!!!!!!
the moth fits shino, kiba a dog, neji is so much a cat! ino fits as a cat too. Sakura makes a good rabbit. What about lee, tenten, and hinata? - lee would make a good ferret or a mongoose - they are into everything! hinata could be a cat or a rabbit. Tenten a viper! fast and sleek, and dangerous! You got gaara, kankaru, or temari too? (i think you did mention gaara - raccoon if anything or a cat both fit) temari a weasel/ferret would be good, and kankaru (can't spell his name) - a spider if anything, or a bear.

i know it would be difficult to bring everyone in - but some of your animal choices are interesting! lee would make a great mongoose - like riki tiki tavi! mongooses are supposed to be very friendly and curious so it would fit perfectly for lee!

love how you covered the demon aspect and kept the changing of the eyes for both sasu and naru. plus i agree, how can a guy get preg. by taking it up the butt? that don't work! - i don't care for male-preg - but i occasionally find a good story that does a decent job of a male-preg. - best one so far is one were naru saves saku and sasu child by taking it into his body using a jutsu when sakura is dying. still waiting for them to finish that one.

Please post next chapter soon!!!!!!

^_^ I understand what you mean about Iruka and Kakashi barely talking at all in the anime, but I think it'd be a good idea to make them a couple. Kakashi could maybe end up helping Iruka with all of the pets...who knows? ^_^ Keep it up. This is awesome. I favorite it everytime I read a new chapter.

This isn't alternativesoldier, it's her sibling who can't find a logout button and doesn't feel like looking for one. I'm Nacht Kind, by the by.

You story moves very well, descriptions functional and appealing without the verbose purple prose of some, and the action was succinct, I could follow what was happening in my mind's eye instead of the typical "and they fought and someone kicked another person's ass I've no idea what's really going on". I love how everyone's a different animal, it's better not to limit yourself, and koala Shikamaru is genius. So, he's a hermaphrodite. Big deal, he's still a boy even if he's not singularly male. Naruto's just guy who's duel wielding on the baby making bits, it's called variety. And it makes way more sense than ass babies, though I've read several that haven't appalled/flummoxxed/offended me, especially since if he didn't have the extras goods then how the hell would they know what was going on?

Poor Sasuke, I'm guessing there are reasons he's so affected by it, like the amount of time he spends with Naruto....for that matter, poor Naruto, it's not a good day.

I can't lie, I love some KakaIru, especially when it's well developed and has a foundation (as you said, they're not exactly cannonical drinking buddies), so it wouldn't hurt my feelings.

This story's just swell,
Nacht

Nice visuals, I really liked the part where Kakashi lifts up Naruto's man bits.=) I can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto getting it on. As for a K/I relationship I can see what you mean about the lack of interaction in the manga, usually the way authors get around that is contact through Naruto himself or at the assignment office that Iruka works at part time. Your solution is novel and I do love the mix of pervert and innocent. It's cute with blush potential. But Kakashi as a delivery boy? That guy is hardly reliable and is way too full of himself to take that job unless he's got ulterior motives.

Nicely done. I really like the fact that you are taking the time to write truly write something good. I love all of the different pets and their personalities. Great job.

Ha! I loved how you made some sort of connection with hermaphrodites and a demon possession mythology. =^^= Thats fantastically creative.


As always. Great work. Keep it up!

Damn I love this story.