rate_review Reviews

it was a really awesome story and id hav to say its probably the best oneshot ive ever read..oh and as for the lemon it fit really well in the story and it wasnt crapy at all ...admitedly i usually like reading ones with more detail but the way you did it it just perfectly fit into the story^^ all i can really say is great job!!

Other than the minor typos, I loved the tone of this piece.
It offers a different perspective without the cannon story line.
Very well written...

That was just about one of the sweetest saddest stories I have ever read. I had to hide my face because I was crying from it. And that lemon was so sweet it made me jealous. Good job.

don't worry, the story is really good