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for Dumb Child Games

by ForYourFantasy

schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i read this story a while back n have been waiting for some new chapters. im really loving it so far n really want to see more of this story so please add some new chapters x3 i never do reviews but yea i REALLY want to see more of this story :3
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good ^^ Please don't abandon it and update soon ^^ I will wait impatiently for the next chapter. Again, great work ^^
person UkeUsagi
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo please update this story i HAVE to see Sasuke potty train Naruto~! (that's somthing I though I would never say xD)
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm shocked that no one mentioned it, then again... no I'm not. You actually have a decent plot, good for a humor story. But you could definitely use a beta. I'm guessing by the nature of the grammatical errors I'm seeing that english isn't first language. So your not doing a bad job, but the errors I've seen are noticeable and you should definitely get a beta to get them out so the story will be better.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is falling hard already....^.^ Please more!
person LumiiSol
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, too adorable. Poor Sasuke, I've experienced those moments of absolute terror with my own younger sibling, those are some of the worst kinds ever. Naruto is so cute though. I can't wait for the next update; keep up the good work!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was cute a jello fight even though it was onesided. cqn't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! I love baby Naruto! he is sooooo CUTE! And Sasuke watching him is just hilarious! Please more!
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha you are the shit. imagining sasuke potty training naruto is going to make me laugh for the next week. can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke!