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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well it was a little sappy but I liked it anyway...even cried a bit when I read the conversation between Iruka and Naruto :) good job! XD
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this.I like how it had a happy ending :3
Keep up the awsome work!
Keep up the awsome work!
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that this focused on the conflict of male/male student teacher because in the real world that taboo is present and I know it's part of the reason I usually avoid Kakashi pairings. In the Narutoverse a lot of writers write the world in an automatic acceptance of gay love and that everyone is a gay couple. While it's not wrong it gets tired sometimes and seems like a lot of times the drama of the relationship is missed or that it's a shortcut to just throw two people together. I was able to appreciate them as a couple more because you focused on those tensions.
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So cute! It's more shouta than I would like but still..you hit the emotional aspect perfectly.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story i had already read it in fanfic but i went trough it again i think that it was a great story both times around and that it coulve still had more lovey dovey in it without been too shota i mean ck out manga for example there are younger kids portraied in manga with even older man and still is yaoi so we love it so this one is ok also we have to understand that there shinobis life is not long for them so they have to make what's best of it and if it is falling in love than they should embrace it for as long as they can ...
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am making my way through fics again and finding ones I read but didn't have time to review.
I think this shot is fluffy and sweet and it almost made me cry a little. I love Naruto with just about every guy on that show I think and you pair him up beautifully.
P.S. I have a KakaNaru shot in the works myself.
I think this shot is fluffy and sweet and it almost made me cry a little. I love Naruto with just about every guy on that show I think and you pair him up beautifully.
P.S. I have a KakaNaru shot in the works myself.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story, I've just found yur stories and enjoy the feeling a description you put into them-
You've become an instant favorite of mine-
You've become an instant favorite of mine-
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wonders silently where the hell my first message took off to* Well either way... sorry to butt in (again) without having read your fic. I'm sure they're wonderful but you seem to favor angst and I try to avoid it as much as possible. Uhm... right... like I've said before... my readers gave that little wretch a piece of their minds so if you want to read furious rants, take a peek in the reviews-list for Funk Me Up ;)
In case you want to get in contact with me... my email is neko-izumi at the usual... hotmail that is... just writing the address doesnt seem to work...
Cheers!
In case you want to get in contact with me... my email is neko-izumi at the usual... hotmail that is... just writing the address doesnt seem to work...
Cheers!
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it *claps* i hate fluff bleh, but this was so damn good that it didnt even feel fluffy :D nice delicious angst. Good job.
Kay~
Kay~
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Sorry, I havent actually read this story, just using the link to get in touch with you.
I was out on the net, happily searching for others writing my favpairing, when lo and behold... I find a story with the same title as mine. 'Hide and Seek'... imagine my stupefied face when I realized its actually MY story. Two of my fics have been stolen by a 12 yearold brat (yes, she openly admits she's 12) called darkxratha on tonfa. And after some checking... youre a victim too. Your story 'Illusions of Nightmares' have been slaughtered and rewritten and its posted under the title 'Revenge is Stupid'... havent read more than a few lines but as a fellow author, you know what I mean when I say 'recognition of style'... right? One of her readers, an innocent one judging by the review, mentions that the story she has is familiar and thats he/she has seen it here. In her answer to that she openly says that YOU ripped HER off... thats nothing but audacity!!
Well, not entirely surprising, I'm pissed. If I have any weird typos in this message its because I'm so freaking pissed I'm shaking!
I have reported her and since admins tend to look into this kind of matter more seriously if the author files a report, I recommend you to file one too.
Here's the link to that little bitch's site...
http://www.narutofic.org/viewuser.php?uid=5762
My readers have been very loyal and chewed a few chunks out of her... how about letting yours have a go too? ;)
Happy revenge!
Sorry, I havent actually read this story, just using the link to get in touch with you.
I was out on the net, happily searching for others writing my favpairing, when lo and behold... I find a story with the same title as mine. 'Hide and Seek'... imagine my stupefied face when I realized its actually MY story. Two of my fics have been stolen by a 12 yearold brat (yes, she openly admits she's 12) called darkxratha on tonfa. And after some checking... youre a victim too. Your story 'Illusions of Nightmares' have been slaughtered and rewritten and its posted under the title 'Revenge is Stupid'... havent read more than a few lines but as a fellow author, you know what I mean when I say 'recognition of style'... right? One of her readers, an innocent one judging by the review, mentions that the story she has is familiar and thats he/she has seen it here. In her answer to that she openly says that YOU ripped HER off... thats nothing but audacity!!
Well, not entirely surprising, I'm pissed. If I have any weird typos in this message its because I'm so freaking pissed I'm shaking!
I have reported her and since admins tend to look into this kind of matter more seriously if the author files a report, I recommend you to file one too.
Here's the link to that little bitch's site...
http://www.narutofic.org/viewuser.php?uid=5762
My readers have been very loyal and chewed a few chunks out of her... how about letting yours have a go too? ;)
Happy revenge!