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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aah, I've never really been into Naruto, but this was pretty good! I was also gonna tell you, AFF snafu'd the review you left me, it was just blank.. Feel free to IM on AIM or YIM to let me know what you thought! Email is fine too, please?
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe.... yeah, I would have given in at the offer for a slushie too. =^^=
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha! this is cool.
Naruto and gang totally make sweet surfers.
This has much potential
Cant wait till next chapter ^__^
Naruto and gang totally make sweet surfers.
This has much potential
Cant wait till next chapter ^__^
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love irrepressible Naruto! And he surfs? Even better. Make sure Naruto shows Sasuke NO MERCY!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I love it! I particularly enjoyed (and LOLd) at the "I'll buy you a sluuuuushiie" line... priceless. I'm looking forward to their date (>>)!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dig it so far! Really good characterization, and I have a weakness for surfer Naruto too! I almost died laughing at the line: "If it were left up to him, he’d lock himself in his room for the entire summer and only come out at night to forage for food." Forage for food! *dies laughing* Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! This story seems VERY promising.
And yes, I am also a sucker for a Surfer!Naruto. He just fits the part so well! Literally ;)
I love the descriptions and eloquency that you're already showing in the first chapter. That and the plot make this story have SO much potential. And the NaruSasu factor doesn't hurt either.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
And yes, I am also a sucker for a Surfer!Naruto. He just fits the part so well! Literally ;)
I love the descriptions and eloquency that you're already showing in the first chapter. That and the plot make this story have SO much potential. And the NaruSasu factor doesn't hurt either.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD, I love this part the most-
"If it were left up to him, he’d lock himself in his room for the entire summer and only come out at night to forage for food. His nice, air-conditioned, dark room, complete with internet access and library. Where he didn’t have to associate with anybody, didn’t have to deal with swarms of giddy females giggling and cooing at him every time he turned around and certainly didn’t have to deal with the astounding level of sheer idiocy some of the damn natives displayed."
LOL, Sasuke is a creature of the night, man, he's got no life in the summer! X3, I imagine Itachi dragging Sasuke into the airport, I feel for him! The flow of your story rocks and I already whore myself for more, so update when you can, and if you update more, the review will get longer each time!-not bribing-*shifts eyes*
XD, Hawaiin Roller Coaster Ride, XD? LOL Please continue!
-Pepsi
"If it were left up to him, he’d lock himself in his room for the entire summer and only come out at night to forage for food. His nice, air-conditioned, dark room, complete with internet access and library. Where he didn’t have to associate with anybody, didn’t have to deal with swarms of giddy females giggling and cooing at him every time he turned around and certainly didn’t have to deal with the astounding level of sheer idiocy some of the damn natives displayed."
LOL, Sasuke is a creature of the night, man, he's got no life in the summer! X3, I imagine Itachi dragging Sasuke into the airport, I feel for him! The flow of your story rocks and I already whore myself for more, so update when you can, and if you update more, the review will get longer each time!-not bribing-*shifts eyes*
XD, Hawaiin Roller Coaster Ride, XD? LOL Please continue!
-Pepsi
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!