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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon can't wait to see what happens
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
me like
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its a great start. I hope the rest of this story turns out as good as your first chapter.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see a lot of potential in this story and I'm loving it so far... please keep up the good work.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not bad, quite enjoying it and looking forward to more
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm i liked it i hope you update soon