rate_review Reviews

Hey, when are you gonna update? The First part seemed good, so please update soon!

enjoyed it. not a great start, but good. would like to see more tenten/naruto interaction, even if it is a naruto/temari. can go either way with sakura bashing, and this is a good start for bashing. liked the half assed apology. thought naruto/sasuke scene was a little off. naruto crying and sasuke wiping the tears? doesn't seem realistic to me, but it is fanfiction so okay. hope to see more of this story.

I liked the story. It played well on human emotoins and let us relate to the main character. Hope you write another chapter will be looking forward to it