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for Moving On

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I may have reviewed for this already but seriously, I'm hoping you'll continue this. Temari and Naruto are a great pairing. As far as het is concerned, I've never been a huge fan of him and Sakura together. She's too abusive. This is a great story. I love your work and eagerly awaiting updates on all your tales.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An update would be nice
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh!! You so totally have to update!!
person UB3RG33K
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued by your intricate tale and am very happy with your choice of pathline. with that in mind, i have an idea and a request. the idea is for sakura, after her rebuilding her life, hook up with kakashi. and the request is to put a rush order on more chapters, PLEASE! your story despite being buried in others is one of my favorites in the whole site and i read a lot. thank you.
person dustin
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G. are all your stories this great? i know you said you wouldnt bash on sakura alot, but could you please drag her in the mud for quite a while? i love seeing that bitch suffer. what can i say? im in a i-hate-sakura mood at the moment. and i can just picture the way naruto looks. if i were an anime character, id have died of bloodloss. anyway, please update soon, for your updates feed my soul and give me the power to kill sakura and any other enemies i have. they also replenish my blood supply. ^///^ see ya soon.
person Isaac
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh c'mon please update this one, its second only to "Why Orange" in hits. I'm anzious to see how it plays out, I love yor witing its too bad you don't write more straight relationships, but I'm not the one writing you are, I just wanna see more Sakura getting jealous, and Temari getting swept off her feet, the only other real good temari naruto pairing on here is "After the Pain" we need more of this pairing
person Isaac2pointO
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just felt the need to point out I spelled anxious wrong lol hopefully thats the right spelling
person NarutosBrat
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I've read. Highly entertaining, and I hope to see more soon.
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this fic!! I don't remember if I already reviewed, but I just re-read it and so I am reviewing it now too...maybe. Anyway, I was wondering when you would be updating again? Not that you probably have a life and all, but this is very important!!!! I NEED updates!!! I have no life!!
Great job if I haven't said so previously!
person seacatsd
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honestly one of the better fics on this site, don't even listen to the neg reviews, you're doing great.