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this is very good. i hope to see it develop even more sooner rather than later:D (ia. please update soon)

This is sounding very interesting! Look, to hell with all those negative "comments". This is entertainment for those of us who read for that sole purpose. We have a choice, read it or don't! I have started to read some fics and then stopped because it was either very badly writting (grammar, context, etc.), but not once have a left a negative comment/review. No one is getting rich off of these fics. I for one, love the fact that Naruto is being portrayed as a person with some semblance of intelligence. Sakura, even though she has grown up some, needs to be put in her place. Come on, these are FICTIONAL characters!!!

Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!!! I want to know what happens when Temari enters the picture...you know what I mean!

You have very interesting ideas in this story. I would like to keep updated on this story, so if you have a link to a blog or anywhere else you keep the story, then please let me have it. AfF is pain when it comes to keeping track of stories you like. If you have this on ff dot net, please send me a link through e-mail or a private message on that website. Thanks and good luck writing, next time I review I'll try to provide more than this: add a little detail to the introduction of the first chapter, maybe just a description of the library or some background information to give the reader a way to 'connect' to it. Otherwise, you may lose some readers if you just expect them to go along with it so easily without any bait in the beginning. Otherwise, from there, I enjoyed the story... even the little bit with Sasuke, although their wording, probably not their actions, sounds too effeminate(?), or far too accented than necessary. (Actions sometimes speak louder than words.)

please post again soon. also you made an error in the first chapter you said narutos jonin vest not his chunnin vest. not being critical just pointing it out.

I LOVE YOUR STORY, I fully agree that Sakura is a cold hearted and callous person, I mean for heaven's sake she beats naruto to a pulp for not commenting on her beauty, or for asking for a date what kind of woman punches a man in the face and enjoys it for trying to show a bit of class and ask the person he loves on a date? I love what you have done with Sasuke and the tear scene was most definately not gay, I mean they are close Naruto saved him from a lifetime of being raped up the bunghole by a nasty old snakeman!! EWWWWWW..... I would certainly comfort a friend of the same sex if they saved me from that!! lol anyway please continue your story, its very good and I wanna read more, you are talented, and I like the new side to naruto he is the kind of guy that would be charming to women like that if he was a little refined

Hey this is some good work. I hear what your saying at the beginning of the chap. I don't understand why everyone thinks two guy can't be friendly to each other with out being gay. I also hear you with the pairing crap. As long as the story is well written I don't care what the characters are together. That is normally why I don't read Naru/Hina most of them are Romeo and Juliet types. I will admit a great hate to Naruto/Sakura, but most of that is just my hate of the character Sakura. Hope to see more of your story soon.

Another great chapter. I've liked the story from the beginning and you've kept it going in a great direction. please keep it up.

Hey,
Just wanted to say that so far your fic is one of my favorites that I have ever read. I'm not going to lie I 100% loath Sasuke with a passion that could rival the intensity of a thousand suns, but I like the way you portray him in you fic. I also was like WTF when I read that you paired Ino with Lee but when I thought about it I was like hmmmm thats kind of a cool pairing. So anyway wanted to say keep up the good work and I was wondering when you plan on updating this story because I'm hooked.

Interesting story so far. Looking forward to more. Until the next update, Ja!

I'm happy you updated :)