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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I can hardly wait to read the rest. Don't worry about the haters, people have different tastes. Some peoples are just much worse than others. Anyway, please hurry with the rest, i really want to read it.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, love the ranting but thank you for continuing this story, cause the sakura bashing is not something that comes along this good, and besides I like heavy naruto character changes, very nice I might be able come up with some ideas so hit me up if you need some ideas, cause I love where this is going
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AN excellent story! Your version of Naruto's charachter is quite captavating and I can not wait to see where you take it. I'am saddened though with the path you have chosen for the Naruto/Hinata pairing. Since I first started watching the series I have been captavated by the possibilty of those two geting together.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Skeeve
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Skeeve
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU.ARE.A.FANFIC.GOD!!
I'm so happy you updated! I love how Hinata suddenly got all serious with Naruto.
And Sakura....HAHAHA! I laugh at your pain...(god I sounded so evil lol X3)
I love stories where Sakura gets put in her place...(insert evil laugh)
Tough noodles for her because Naruto's not gonna take her back!!
Love the pairing! Can't wait for another update!
Ja =^_^=
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I'm so happy you updated! I love how Hinata suddenly got all serious with Naruto.
And Sakura....HAHAHA! I laugh at your pain...(god I sounded so evil lol X3)
I love stories where Sakura gets put in her place...(insert evil laugh)
Tough noodles for her because Naruto's not gonna take her back!!
Love the pairing! Can't wait for another update!
Ja =^_^=
(>'.')>
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I personally like your story and believe that it is your story. If I don't like something I dont read it, that done. I hope to see more.
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
in my personal opinion, this is very well written. its much more involved than some fics i've read lately. i cant wait to see this updated
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused. The summary says Temari is paired with Naruto but if anything it looks like he's getting close to Tenten. I'm not suggesting a pairing change. I'm Just curious. By the way a very well written story. I like the way it switches point of view. The only thing i might change would be adding a little more information regarding what Naruto is doing for training drop me a line back
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good! please update again soon.
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I'm glad Naruto managed to give Ero-sennin a piece of his mind like that. Sasuke's sentence is a good one..heavy but not too bad. I wonder who is going to catch his eye. I like the Temari pairing. *giggles* Sakura is going to get a major wake up call!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! This is good! Love the way you describe the characters, their behaviour, your style of writing... yeah, I guess I love pretty much everything about this story! Keep it up!