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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person blaquekitsune
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
luv it to dead. update soon.
person thas
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Usuratonkachi? sasake always calls naruto that what does it mean? and in your story you say naruto told sakura he wouldn't give her a second chance i just reread your story and that wasn't in the story. not critsism just pointing it out.
person Annie-chan
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think Sakura was just very badly portrayed. Sakura when she was twelve and at the start of the series, probably yeah (although this one is more annoying) but the portrayal completely ignores her growth as a character throughout 400 chapters of the manga, so that's kind of disappointing. Character bashing for no reason isn't fun to read.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved this one possibly even more than the first one!

Sakura's shocking realization was very well handled. I also like how he went about getting Hinata to train Sasuke. (Hmm.. should I start imagining Hinata/Sasuke pairings down the line? >:D) lol
Great job. Keep up the kick ass work. ^^




(Also, I highly agree with your rant. I read the reviews after I post mine and I've always noticed those ones containing "Eww, this is not yaoi." or "This pairing doesn't work, only my personal favorite pairing is legitimate!" I read these comments and I always think to myself "wow.. what an idiot." I mean really. Wth?)
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is really good stuff. i can't wait to read more, please keep up the good work
person wolfsilverflame
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed your story it was a pleasure to read thank you
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!!! WAHHHHHH I'M DYING OVER HERE!!! PLEASE UPDATE!! JA =^_^=
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really want to read the next chapter. it seems like it has great potential! please update
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would definitely love to see more of this fic. Great writing and good plot-work. Hope to see more in the future!
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice man