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by Sessygirl

schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha.. pride be damned.. Sasuke finally recognized a good thing for what it was. ^^

Keep up the great work!
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAHHHH...TT_TT It was a cliffie. Although it was short, I really liked it. Can't wait for your next update!
person qwerty
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ACK! Sasuke's coming back! He's finally got his head out of his ass.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going!
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.o

YOU TAKE TOO LONG!
Even I updated my story waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay before you did! :P
Tell your beta to kick that butt into gear! XDDDD
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another cliffhanger. All right that's it. Time to bring out the big guns. I decided to let you hide in your bush but nooo. You had to go and do this. (As I'm ranting I drag out a large wooden crate from which loud and horrible noises are coming from) My nin dogs were a bust but these creatures don't need to be trained. Just point them in the right direction and watch the bloodshed. (Puts crate in front of bush)

Prepare to enter Feline Hell. (Opens crate and nothing happens. I go in front of crate, peer inside, and am promtly attacked by four very angry cats) NOOOO help me. (My "vicious" nindogs return and the cats get off. Much barking, chasing, and hissing insues. Choas reigns supreme and I hide along with you in your bush)
Alright I give up. But I'm still not happy about the Cliffy.

I am happy that everything wasn't hunky-doory and Naruto explained everything.
That would have been too easy and I'm happy you didn't take the easy way out. Naru and Setsu's bonding also made me happy. Please update soon.
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cries* v_v you promised! you promised you won't drop a cliffy like that on me again! *runs off crying*

oh yippie sasuke came back on his own. i'm so happy!! will naru kick him to the curb? i hope not! *singing i see a happy family in the future song* it's cute that setsu called naru daddy. but what will he call sasuke? hmm, i hope it's not teme lol.
person Skull Candy
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I swear, if you dare finish this story with that chapter I will chuck the biggest pile of encyclopedias that I can find at your head. There are too many loose threads still hanging in this story for it to be satisfactory, to you or us.

I want to know what it'll be like for Naruto and Setsuna to live together, how Setsuna's life would change because of this new revelation (good or bad?) and I know Sakura will be very concerned for both of them, or at least will be concerned about their - nonexistent - diet. I also want to know if Sasuke will really just leave it at that or if he will try to find out more about his son and what's happened to Naruto since he left.

That said, this is a good story, and I commend you on a job well done. I really hope that you'll keep writing this story and won't give up. Good luck and have fun.
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke will be back. We all know he wont be able to resist. I loved how they so easily fell back into comfort with each other. Sasuke is going realise what he's been missing and its going to eat away at his soul. Mwahahahhahahahaha! The bastard.

^^

Keep up the good work!
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Teh awesomeness! We are cliffy-less too. I love you. ^^ Spring break... Ah... I miss school. But writting a oneshot or finishing this fic; I'll be reading whatever you post. So it doesnt matter
person qwerty
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I vote for the next chapter of this to be your next update.
So Setsuna is officially the Hokage's son. No doubt some old enemy of Naruto's will come out and Sasuke will come back and save the day? lol
Great chapter. Keep going!