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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope there's more soon.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a good story and i cant wait for the update
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got my attention.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like something intriguing to read with all these loose ends. It makes for interesting reading.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WEEEELLLLL!!!! More intrigue!!!! Who are they working for??? Is Kotomi or Ryo having sex with the Boss???? So, you've some reading, GREAT!!!! I love your story so far.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It started out rather promising and then... you added a shitload of random, so called "original" characters. Why do some people do this all the time? It would be more interesting to use the original Naruto cast and build something new around that. I don't want to piss you off or anything, but consider this friendly criticism and the reason I won't read your story anymore.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see an update. It's not like I've been thinking about this fic non-stop but I did occasionaly wonder if it would ever be updated. I can hardly wait to see what happens between Nauto, Sasuke, and their son )whose name I have already forgotten.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very promising! I like this a lot.
update!
update!
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. I really caught my interest.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, yes please continue. There is soo much promise in this story. The plot is amazing. I am begging you to continue.