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Ahh! I can't wait for more, pulsating start, but please if this is going to be about abuse, give a warning so I can skip it, hopefully not, I mean otherwise why would Sasuke be so adamant to get an answer, why would he be so angry, why would he hover over Naruto like that?

Really, cannot wait to find out the rest.

BTW you flip sayings like - what more do you want from me? to sthing that is still noticeably the same sentence only it's worded wrong. Anyhow don't worry about it, please update :) lol

Thought I'd check it out since you mentioned it, it's interesting. Nice twist to the Sasuke and Sakura getting married plot. It seems Naruto is tired of trying to be nice about it, come to the end of his rope. The lemon to follow will be interesting I'm sure. How will Sasuke react to all this? Will his anger at the kiss continue for what Naruto has in mind? Will he in the end unwillingly give in to the pleasure? Will it be pleasurable for Sasuke? More of an expression of Naruto's feelings towards Sasuke and him not wanting to loose him to Sakura, his once in a life time shot? Or will Naruto be too angry and use it as a way to punish him? Angry that he is loosing Sasuke to Sakura? Is he only angry about loosing Sasuke to Sakura or just that he is loosing him in general or is it that he is angry about loosing them both; that they are leaving him behind in a way? What will that mean for Sasuke's relationship with Sakura and what will happen to his and Naruto's relationship after this? A lot of different ways to take this story and it's all going to depend on Ch 2. I can see why your having difficulties. Good luck.

littleolmee
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Kyu you can't end it there is really good ^^; be waiting for the next chapter.

I like where this is going, you have a good writing style. I can't wait to read more!

LOL Sasuke went there asking for Naruto to tap that, and now he's going to get it nine-tailed style.

Next chapter please!

I likey

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ohmygosh! Sasuke's in trouble now! (The fun kind of trouble. ^^ hehe) Part two promises to be a good one. >:) mwhahahahhahaa!