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Lol, actually I thought the end of the chapter was pretty good but I hate cliff-hangers, they're so mean! Anyway, it's a pretty good story and I really enjoyed it, I wasn't too sure about Sasuke's reaction at the end, I mean he betrays Naruto and then has the nerve to get upset after - I'd have said they were even after that - so hitting him was like :-O Anyways, update soon ;)

I love the plot but you REALLLLLLLLLY need a beta. With the grammar and spelling mistakes it kind of distracts from the story and it's a good one.

Well this seems like it could be a very good story. But...I think you should get a beta. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, and you could definately use some more details. So, it's not bad, and this is in no way meant to be a flame. I just think that you should have someone read it over and fix all the mistakes before you post the next chapter, and definitely edit this first one. Over all, it could be very good, and I am interested. If you need help, don't hesitate to email me.

wow what a story is good i cant wait for the next cahp please update soon if possible thanks :)