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schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this story!!!!!! i hope you do a sequel or something!!!!!!
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! A happy ending!
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... i though the 5 months was bad.. 2 years you say.. lame :( This story is depressing the shit outta me. I cant believe sasuke had to go through all of that and naruto was free for 2 whole years! what were u doing all that time naruto?! sasuke needed you! *pouts* *feels sad*
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is it over??? it sounds like an end :( aaww i'll be sad to see it go if it is, though it broke my widdle heart a couple a times along the way lol i'm glad they got their happy ending... assuming this is the end, if it isnt theeeeennn yay! bring on some consensual smut! LMAO :D
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
5 months of torture... :( :( sooo saadd!! *cries* my poor babies
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* no! why are they so evil! *grumble grumble* me no like mean iruka :( The iruka/naruto scenes were so painful to read, bad iruka is hard for me to stomach. Bad kakashi on the other hand lol that i can work with. hmmm i might just enjoy that there kaka/sasuke lol Sasuke's been such a top throughout this i could read a little him bottoming :D but i don wanna read anymore mean iruka hurts naruto *big googly eyes at you* rofl

keep it going, u surprised the hell's bells outta me with iruka and kakashi!
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BRAVA! BRAVAAA!!! you've ever got a little dirty talking thing going on now *rraaarr* LOL hehehehe i crack me up
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i gotta say i'm a little iffy about the 15 years old thing, all that sex and marriage at 15?? :S

but whatever, its ur fanfiction u can write watever u want, so moving on to more important things! your lemons are AWESOME!! :D read along get one and go 'whoo damn!' keep reading and *gasp* there's another right on its tail! lol that was sooo super hott. naruto on hands and knees on the grass getting pounded from behind followed by a second sexy romp just a couple minutes later... i loved it :) lmao

oh, to cancel out some of the pervness lol i have to say the wedding itself was actually pretty cute both boys tearing up and all awwwwww :D
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those lemons are as hot as the first ones! Looks like those dark men are just starting taking action. I hope Naruto and Sasuke watch their backs!
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THOSE LEMONS WERE SO TOTALLY HOT! Who are those dark men that you mentioned in the summary, do you mean the Akatsuki? Can't wait to find out!