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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so funny i almost peed my pants (a drop doesn't count). i i am curious as to how tsunande is going to handle the news. i also would like to know if she is jiraiya's sister or oochimaru. can't wait for the next update.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Sasuke is such a bastard! I really really want to strangle him!
Poor Naruto. Maybe if he was explained the situation then he could be happier(stupid Sasuke). By the way, I love the odd pairings, it makes this story so original and hilarious. I can't wait to see where you go with this, because it seems like a really interesting plot. Even if I hate Sasuke at the moment.
Please please update soon :)
Poor Naruto. Maybe if he was explained the situation then he could be happier(stupid Sasuke). By the way, I love the odd pairings, it makes this story so original and hilarious. I can't wait to see where you go with this, because it seems like a really interesting plot. Even if I hate Sasuke at the moment.
Please please update soon :)
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. Orochimaru makes a scary wife. I think that's one of the thing that got me hooked. I'm so tired of him being the bad guy. When I read about Sasuke being pregnant I though somebody got him pregnant & he's making Naruto take responsibility. I like your version much better. Although I wonder how Sasuke is going to explain it later that there is no bun in the oven.
I hope you put more Jira/Orochi moments in your chapters. Just not the smut part please (eww).
This fic just got bumped up to #1 of all the fic that I'm waiting for updates.
I hope you put more Jira/Orochi moments in your chapters. Just not the smut part please (eww).
This fic just got bumped up to #1 of all the fic that I'm waiting for updates.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooo funny! I love it so far.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this fic is hilarious. keep up the great work
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Poor Naruto though... Sasuke needs to just come out and tell him how he feels.. afterall.. if Naruto won't share a bed with him, him not actually being pregnant will eventually show.. as he doesn't show..Looking forward to the next update!!
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The way you wrote the relationships between everyone confuses me. You can't just expect your readers understand relationships that are established in your mind. try giving a little backround first. However I love the plot. This is going to be great. I love how Sasuke is such a bitch.
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why would you marry your enemy, unless you secretly love them.hope you can update soon
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems interesting. I'll be reading this to see what Sasuke is up too. *snickers*
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that is hilarious! i look foward to your next update.