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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story!! Please do not stop this story!! I really want to read more...in fact...i demand more of this awesome story!! :D :P
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Rereading again...Gods, I love this story!!!
person 7mizu8
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!! I really like it so far!.
Everyone loves Naruto!^_^
hehe even Itachi was affected
Thanks for the awesome story so far!
person dustin
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G. (im thinking of starting all my reviews with that) that story is great too.and i think naruto helping all those people is cute. but i cant tell. hes 12 right? or younger? anyway, UPDATE POR FAVOR! i need good stories and yours are currently the best of the best. so hurry!
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is so amazing so far. Beautiful! I absolutely love how you've changed the anime. Naruto is such a sweet boy and I think you perfectly put into words how things would have been for him if he'd been given a chance as a younger boy. He WOULD have been changing peoples' lives left and right right away if he'd had the love and support of a proper guardian. I love what you did with Kyuubi, too! So creative in everything you've done. All his interactions with the different characters really warm the heart and you can't help but love Naruto-kun and want to stomp anyone who thinks badly of him. Very well written and VERY, VERY enjoyable. I can't wait to see what you have for us next! Please, PLEASE email me at TigeressGV @ Aol.com when you update. Also, if you are in need of a beta, I've never done it before but in school, all the kids used to come to me so I could proof-read their stories and stuff. I'm really good at catching grammar and spelling errors. Let me know if I could be of service. Thanks again and best of luck in your writings!
person Becca-Chan
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers like a puppy wanting out*

Why?! Please please please update!!!

I would loveth you lots.

Becca-chan
person garsdal
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is ubber good, i beg and plead to you, please update soon.
person Chibi
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is just awesome, I love little Naruto! :3
person nm1716
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
person Skeeve
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very enjoyable read. Your ideas for this story are quite different then any others that I have read so far and I can't wait to see where you take this. So far you have invertes the entire Naruto universe, lets see if you can turn it side ways now.
Good luck
Skeeve