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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
way totaly cute!!! love it lots!!!

anyways, i am in major pointers for my fic. please?!

laters! ~_^
person kyu000
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! please continue. its extremly cute. i luv it. and you got alot done in just 1 chapter.
person Xenobia
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squealing w/unabashed glee*
Sweeie...I LOVE THIS!!!!

Please add to the update list, ne?

>X<
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I can't wait to see what happens next. Although I'll patiently wait for your next update. Keep up the good work.
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Konnichiwa!
I just gotta say: Wow! I usually steer clear of AU fics, but I just finished reading Why Orange all the way through from the beginning-which only took about 7 hours, inluding meals and bathroom breaks @_@ . . . -and it was awesome enough that I wanted to give the rest of your fics a try.
Long story short(so to speak), I love it. I really hope you plan to continue it! It's actually kind of nice to contemplate Naruto actually having some GOOD childhood experiences. I'm a Cancer, so I tend to start empathizing with what Naruto's life must have been like before Team Seven, and it usually depresses the hell out of me. But I digress.
I like it, I love it, I want some more of it! And I WILL throw reviews at you, if it helps inspire you to write more. You've got a lot of talent and potential-now, shall you use your powers for good, or for awesome? ;)
Glomp Itachi and Sai for me!

Love and plot bunnies,

Dina-chan
person MeLaiya
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is just too cute. Please update soon.
person Moiira
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMG! It's Sooooo good. Can't wait for the rest ^^ LOVE you're story's.
person nm1716
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person Jien
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, update soon, I like the blackmail part :P