rate_review Reviews

What a wonderful story! So well written and well thought out! I was on the edge on my seat the entire time!!!!! The one criticism I can give you is when your story was published it had a lot of code in it,* style='mso-ansi-language:EN-US'>** I found that a little annoying because it was attached directly to the word following it. Other than that it was great! Don't worry about English not being your first language, it isn't mine either, you did wonderfully! I never had trouble understanding what you were writing nor did I find any errors! Rest assured I will be reading your other stories!

I was greatly impressed with this story. I felt you kept Naruto's character perfectly and I never once felt the characters drift away from their published personalities. I hated the fact you killed some of my favorite characters, but I also felt that the story would not have been as great as it is without their deaths. I loved the ending. It was not an overly cheesy long ending nor was it rushed. Greatly impressed with your writing abilities and look forward to reading more of your stories.

I can't put into words how much I enjoyed this story. I can't believe English isn't your first language. By the first 3 chapter I had already concuded that your English is waaaay better than mine lol. I really love this story and your writing is spectacular. This is by far the best ItaSaku story that I've read ever. Its perfect and your actions scenes kick ass. I'm really glad I read this story.

All I really have to say is that this story was brilliantly written. I enjoyed it all thoroughly.

Awesome story! Brought a few tears to my eyes...
I love how different life turned out, due to one decision Itachi made or did not make... Amazing how some events still occurred while others did not. All because of Itachi.

Sakura, I loved reading about her trails and tribulations! I love how she 'evolved'.
I love your perspective and creativity!

good luck,
Cannot wait to read more.

Hey Zelha!
Despite the fact that english isn't your first language, you've done a spectacular job with all your fanfics. I loved all of 'em :) A shoutout to your betas too (very few people appreciate the betas in the reviews). Can't wait for your next fic!!

Awesome story. I loved Sakura, and how super-strong she was. She was exactly how I would expect Tsunade's apprentice to be. I think you captured my ideal Sakura perfectly. Thank you. This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here and over on fanfiction.dot. Thanks again for this wonderful story. :)

I've become incredibly invested in this story! I'm REALLY loving the slow growing relationship between Itachi and Sakura, instead of the *Insta-Love* reflex that is so common. I'm looking forward to your next chapter <3

thank goodness you updated. this fic is going great. keep up the great work and update soon

You're incredible, and your stories are wonderful sinfully indulgent reads. I am looking forward to your next chapters.