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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if the manga is putting you all out of sorts, then stop reading the manga until the story is done!!! X3 hahahaha. but i DO love this story.... 8 chapters and they're barely getting started o.O though i think that the transition b/w cold Itachi to somewhat-intrigued Itachi was somewhat rushed (and had barely any explanation at all), it was cool :3 weeeeeee story!
go find out who did it Itachi! >< fugging Fugaku
go find out who did it Itachi! >< fugging Fugaku
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude, great fic!!!!! I stayed up till midnight reading it!!!!!! Please oh please hurry up and up load the next chapter! I am dying to know what is going to happen! Great story, love Sakura-chan's attitude. keep it up!
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to be updating anytime soon?
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite impressed. Despite the non-massacre version of this story, Itachi is still the same arrogant, closed, calculating ninja we all love. I think that the amount of OOCness you gave him is perfect, as it would need to be altered considering the change in circumstances. I really like the element of the Clan that you added, how closed off they make themselves, and the command they hold over the Hokage. Very interesting dynamics. I am looking forward to the next installment, so please keep up the great work!
-Sphinx
-Sphinx
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you planning on updating this soon?
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is amazing!
i love sakura and itachi here. keep it up!
i love sakura and itachi here. keep it up!
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... I'm so loving this story. Please update soon.
Ps sorry to hear about the writers block. That sucks.
Ps sorry to hear about the writers block. That sucks.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great! Though I really really wanted to strangle Fugaku. Good job on his characterization. Though I wonder if you went too far by having him refer to Sakura as "girl".It almost sounds too ridiculously demeaning. I'd like to think that even snooty and arogant Fugaku would have more poise than that. But oh well, to each him own. You still got the point accross.
And that small ItaSaku scene at the end was hot, though I kinda don't see why it's such a big deal that Sakura won't tell even Itachi why she got suspended. I dunno, if she's in the frame of mind where she knows she was wronged, you'd think she'd be able to defend herself in front of others. oh well, nevermind. ^_^ please update soon!
And that small ItaSaku scene at the end was hot, though I kinda don't see why it's such a big deal that Sakura won't tell even Itachi why she got suspended. I dunno, if she's in the frame of mind where she knows she was wronged, you'd think she'd be able to defend herself in front of others. oh well, nevermind. ^_^ please update soon!
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally another chapter, and what a chapter oh boy i am sorry for fugaku when Itachi finds out about the truth of sakura's suspension. I do hope you dont give this story up caquse i really love it and it is really well written and beautifully put together fo an AU Naruto fic. Please get over your writer's block soon and update.
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story I hope you will continue this story. I like the way have Sakura and Itachi are interaction with each other. I laughed at the scence where Sakura threaten Sai for making Naruto yelling.