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for Dreams

by inediblefrogs

person tariray
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
betweenj sputtering in giggle fits and face-redding hotness, you've made a hell of an awesome story.
Well done my good pervert, I tip my hat off to you. (and toss you a pair of wet panties in the process)
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha how funny, i loved your semi-sarcastic tone and I vote for a sequel!!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I absolutely loved this one. I very recently started reading all of your fics from beginning to end, and overall, this is my favorite. I laughed like mad the whole time. There's nothing I love more than a dash of humor in the middle of a smut scene. That, and I just kept imagining things from Hayate's point of view.

This was awesome, and I love the rest of the series as well; keep up the good work!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*HOWLS LAUGHING*
I love you madly. More on the wherefore and why (really just a fancy way of being redundant, that) over at That Other Site.

Also, there are a couple missing words- minor words, like "with" and "the" and "a." But I'm too lazy and too amused to point them out just now- if you care, poke me mercilessly later. <3
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so great OMG I love it. These two characters done in your style are my favorite characters to read about. Thanks for the fun.
person llyoung
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the discussions of the dreams that they each had had, loved the humor, loved the sex and loved "lotion boy".

Wonderful story. Thanks for writing.