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Very interesting. I'm glad that you're back writing this. I had really enjoyed it.
I loved the prank war between Sasuke and Itachi. I supposed Pein is in charge of Akatsuki. A united Uchiha and Naruto gang would be freaking awesome.
Keep going!

Okay you know what? Just stop it. I was willing to give this a chance but your chapters have no flow, its another pathetic cliche everyone and their mother is doing, and then you suddenly want to change it to make it fucking bats and wolves? Just stop it! if I could, I would erase the fact that I wasted my time reading this shit. Practice how to REALLY WRITE and maybe, jsut fucking maybe you'll have a decent story. but the chances of that happening is when Hell opens its gates for world ice skating rings and heaven opens its gates as a free whore house.

I think you should go back to the original plot. It was so exciting and had tons of promise. I feel pretty ambivalent about this restart.

Wow! a NaruNeji! but i would prefer NejiNaru. ^_^ Naruto is so cute as an Uke. But whoever is the Seme is ok as long as the two are in it.

Hmm...

Well, I remember reading this when there was only the character profiles.
Annnnd, yeah.
It fairly interested me, but now it being NaruNeji... yeah, no.

Plus I don't think I can sit through your typos and errors, I highly suggest you get a beta reader.

And even then, I don't really know, this idea feels like it has potential, but somehow it seems like you're not portraying it right.

Sorry if I'm coming off as rude or bitchy, but that's just my 2 cents.
I don't mean to offend; only for you to hopefully grow from it.

SasuNaru(Sasu) is SO not overrated ]=
Over-written, yes, but its the only reason I even aknowledge this series anymore.

lol Nevertheless, have fun on your vacation~
And I wish you the best of luck~

Oh, and btw, I think you gave me the COOLEST idea for a crossover fic.

I'm not gonna say of what, I don't want to jinx it.
But yeah... omg I'm gonna go crazy over this.
I guess I should thank you in a way? xD

So, erm--thanks? :hugs:
=3

I'm curious to see how NaruNeji will work out since Sasuke clearly has a claim on Neji.
NaruSasu is NOT overrated!! It's one of the best pairings out there *sniffs*
But NaruNeji is still pretty hott... *waggles eyebrows* I love Neji...
Have fun in Trinidad!

Damn, that sucks. Sigh. & was really starting to love this story. I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next....O well. Say La ve. ^-^
Just so you know, I'm really not a Seme Naruto Fan. & I'm very limited & picky on my _xNaru Stories. I read most SasuxNaru, half GaarxNaru & few others for Uke Naruto... But what ever I read Naruto is almost always the Uke. Sorry. But like I said, I'm picky. ~_~" (Giggle)
Anyway, Guess that's it for me. Wish you luck on your story. Later.
Kisses ^-~

NOooooooo! please keep it like you had it please? There are so many vampire/werewolf stories and your original mafia one had a really good hook! But *sigh* if you must change it I will of course support you and read/review your new story even though I think your original is kick ass!

I like that idea. I mean the chapters as is are really good.