rate_review Reviews

Huh. I get it. Your going to make it kind of like the movie underworld. Huh...cool. I love that movie. I have both of them. Can't wait to see what you write. Also, I know your probably not going to do this, but is doesn't hurt to ask right?...You see when ever people write a Naruto fiction involving vampires & werewolves they always make Sasuke a vampire & Naruto a werewolf. & although I completely understand why they do that, Trust me I do, I still can't help but think that Naruto would make a chillingly, beautiful vampire. Sigh. Wouldn't you? I mean think about it. Wearing those dark skin tight clothing, with a bit of black eye liner under his eyes, you know, to bring out those beautiful blue eyes I love so much. Lol ^-^ I get chills just thinking about it. Sigh. Plus it would be something king of different, you know. A little twist go give people a little whiplash. Lol ^-~. But again that’s just me. I completely understand if you don't, it was just a little suggestion. Anyway, Thanks for listening. & I can't wait to see/read what you write (Giggle) May your story or chapter be realest soon. Can't wait. Later.
Kisses. ^-~
P.S. Good luck. ^-^

NO PLEASE.

NO VAMPIRES, OR LYCANS, OR WEREWOLVES, PLEASE.

;__; That'd just make this trite and cliche and it was already good, the way it was!

Now you're just gonna add a useless plot twist, that's going to be like every other Vampire/Werewolf novel out there.

Please?

For your fans, please no?

Interesting shift...kinda like Underworld ^_^ But I'm sure yours will have much more steamy smut ;-) Can't wait to see where you go with it!

wow!!!!! But this chpt is really too short!!!! Maybe more converstaion between Naruto and Sasuke will be better.

I wish you had wrote more but if you update quickly then it's ok. I laughed out loud when I read that Iruka was in the Uzumaki gang and I thought that you would put Kakashi on the Uchiha gang, that would have been a great balance. I loved reading about they were wanted for and just who you picked to be in which gang, I wonder who Ino's husband is? It will be interesting how you utilize some of the other characters in the Narutoverse, maybe some of them can be cops or even lawyers, there are quite a few things that you can play around with. Loved that cliffie, I wonder who shot who. I love gang stories, there should definitely be more and I think I will like yours very much.

I thought this was a really cool premise! Naruto mafia style ;-) Update soon!

Whose going to be with Naruto? Just so you know I HATE Sasuke and Neji together with each other! But I still will read your story because it's too good to pass up.

Wow! I think this story will be very interesting! Is sasuke and Neji lovers than later change to sasuke and naruto?

I still hate SasuNeji/NejiSasu and them being fuck buddies, still means that they are together.

Very nice plot and beginning. x) I hope you update more.