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cool story really liked it. YAY LEMONS! :)

You still have the golden touch. It was your writings that got me hooked on this genre and I'm happy to see you making another go at it. I also like the use of Japanese words in all these fics. I think it helps give them an added dimension to the total story. I'm pretty sure there are anime reference sights that people can be go to check out definitions. I think Wiki also has something like a dictionary for just this thing.
Good luck and hope to see more of you work.

First for your answer to your question: Yes I like the addition of japanesse words to a story/not only the suffixes (chan, kun, etc.) for to me the american language is an evolving melting pot of culture and ideas. So to answer your second question: It's true you've been gone awhile but I don't see much decay in your writing skills, so if you start writing again (I HOPE, I HOPE) any feeling of being rusty will wash away like water down a drain. Now for the last answer to your story: I thought it was very "interesting" , scientist say sexual attraction is one part physical, one part mental, and one part instint. I always say if you love someone with all your heart with each other; FUCK LIKE KINKY RABBITS IN HEAT!!!! I'm looking forward to your next story and can I ask for you to listen too? If you ever do the whole Uchiha mission thing; make it Hinata followes the team from a safe distance and when Tayuya is beaten Hinata catches up and saves her, (but you know captured) and later with Naruto...? Any who keep up the good work and it's good to see again.

its a very good story, one that i feel should continue beyond the last chapter, mainly cause i want to read more of it. i heavily enjoyed this piece ^^

awsome

I Loved Naruto's And Hinata's Trust Between Each Other;I SO Love Their Pairing.The Rest,I Don't Mind.But I Liked Your Style - Not Too Rushed.

Thanks For Sharing! ^^

Very good finish to a very good story.

I'm sorry it's over, but the ending was nice!

Thank you for an amazing story and a great finale.

I'm sorry to hear that you are forced to retire for some time, because I hoped to read more from you.

I wish you good luck and hope that you can find the time to write again.

Thank you for your hard work.

Well done my friend. This was one of the few stories that actually kept me coming back to this website.