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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
somehow i just knew naruto was going to end up with more than 6 girls in his harem
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Good 10th chapter.
Hmm. So you say you like Kenshin, Bleach and Naruto?
Well, I definitly want to read more of you.
So maybe a suggestion.
Do you think you can manage a crossover story between Naruto and Kenshin? I think that might be fun ^^.
Imagine Sanosuke Sagara in a sparring match with Sakura. Or Kenshins Ultra Fast Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu. Not to mention his abilitys in deducting the enemys movement according to their emotions.
Well, it is up to you if you take on on that suggestion. But it should be Naruto or Kenshin (or both). I don't like Bleach.
Hmm. So you say you like Kenshin, Bleach and Naruto?
Well, I definitly want to read more of you.
So maybe a suggestion.
Do you think you can manage a crossover story between Naruto and Kenshin? I think that might be fun ^^.
Imagine Sanosuke Sagara in a sparring match with Sakura. Or Kenshins Ultra Fast Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu. Not to mention his abilitys in deducting the enemys movement according to their emotions.
Well, it is up to you if you take on on that suggestion. But it should be Naruto or Kenshin (or both). I don't like Bleach.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think your chapter was able to satisfy all voting parties. I would like to read another story written by you.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, orgy. Keep it coming.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How come Naruto has to limit the number of girls??? I mean, he's been alone all his life, having a bunch of girls is a good thing! And if Tenten just wants mindless Sex I can see her living separately from the clan but being invited over for orgies. But my vote is on Shion, even though I haven't seem the fourth movie I like what I've read about her. Plus, she honestly cares for Naruto like Hinata does, so she's a good choice.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter but I was surprised you entered all of the member of his Harems into his clan in just one chapter. The girl who`d fit in the harem too is Anko. The overall story was quite interesting( who could`ve envisagened Hinata as a sex-fiend, hehe) and the Kyuubi twist was quite interesting keep it up
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good update! Can't wait for the raunchy sex with Ino!
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can totally see the other girls making good use of Ino and Sakura's skills at pussy licking, very hot! I can also see Hana roleplaying as a dog for fun with Naruto.
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter.