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For the last girl you should do Shion form the fourth movie. If you have seen it heres a link
http://www.narutocentral.com/multimedia/episodes/mov1/
Hell at the end she even ask if he will help here have a child see would be great.

I can't wait to see the next update. Thanks.

Well Yugito appears in the manga about the time of Naruto's elemental traning, I believe (since he gets some advice from Asuma and you are introduced to the two Akatsuki members Hidan and Kakuzu who beat Yugito and take her to extract her demon). So if the anime's about there, then you'll see her soon (I know it's after the attempt to meet with Sasori's spy and meeting with Sasuke, plus she's a Kumo shinobi if that helps).

Nice. Pretty well written. It has a good amount of comedic value, don't know if that is what you were going for but this last chapter was clearly done to set up the rest of the story, and was very quick. It is a good story line. Looking forward to more.

Only new harem suggestion I have is Tenten, and a plea not to pick Anko, because she's just too damn stereotypical for harem fics. Good work, by the way. Keep it coming.

Awesome chapter update soon.

1.Anko
2.Shizune

Pretty good so far, not to much or to little sex , even though I am still waiting for a moresome (which I am pretty sure will come any minute now ^_^.) I was a little turned off by naru/tsun but now that she practically has turned 25 I guess I can get used to it. I nominate ten-ten and temari.

An addition to my previous review. While some people have mentioned having Anko be with Naruto (and sometimes I don't have a problem with it), in the case of your story I think she'd be better with someone else. The reason is that Anko should be with someone who can be in a full relationship with her, not one where she can be cast aside (if Naruto was allowed to marry the other women this wouldn't be a problem). Instead I say maybe stick her with Iruka, since he has a chance to understand her both through his own lonliness and seeing Naruto grow up. While it is true Anko and Naruto have had harder lives, I ruka knows like them what it's like to not have anyone that can be there for you all the time (I don't count Sasuke due to the fact that he could have joined any family he wanted to and yet he refused).

Also if Anko was with Iruka who is kinda like a big brother/father figure to Naruto, then she could tease him and help him with any questions/problems he might have with the women he's with (since some of the women he'd ask, he can't just go and ask them due to being in a relationship with them).

Great story! More dirty talking please! ;)

You could add Anko and/or Kurenai to the harem as well. And maybe the Nibi Jinchuuriki (2-tailed cat) Nii Yugito too. Keep it up!

That was interesting how you youthicized Tsunade. I going to suggest Anko and Ayame for the harem.