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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best. Story. Ever.
you plot is great, the Naruto and Hinata here are very cute [and hot] and the InoSaku, just brilliant, surprising and hot.
Your lemons are too great! i can't read this without relieving myself shortly after!
Hope you update again soon, but i can wait :)
you plot is great, the Naruto and Hinata here are very cute [and hot] and the InoSaku, just brilliant, surprising and hot.
Your lemons are too great! i can't read this without relieving myself shortly after!
Hope you update again soon, but i can wait :)
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What about Tsunami that way Inari can join the clan also and they whould actually have more than Naruto the women and the babys in his clan
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I like how you explained Tsunade was young again. And as for no female Kyuubi that's understandable (since in your story Kyuubi is a part of Naruto now). As for other traits though of Naruto's bloodline I think would be increased healing, stamina, chakra reserves and senses (also due to the Kyuubi's merger with him). As for other women to add to the harem for Naruto, I have two picks (in order of importance), they are: Nii Yugito (please let Nibi's jincuuriki live) and Uzuki Yugao (having an ANBU around to help protect the children would be nice).
As for the Council another reason they wouldn't be upset with Naruto and Tsunade's little romp is the fact that the Hokage is now in her prime again with all of her knowledge. That would make her a much more powerful and effective Hokage (since she would be able to retain the position for a longer time before she had to choose a successor, or chose to resign to let someone else become Hokage).
Anyways let's see what happens next.
As for the Council another reason they wouldn't be upset with Naruto and Tsunade's little romp is the fact that the Hokage is now in her prime again with all of her knowledge. That would make her a much more powerful and effective Hokage (since she would be able to retain the position for a longer time before she had to choose a successor, or chose to resign to let someone else become Hokage).
Anyways let's see what happens next.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
TENTEN!!!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well beyond the harem I'm kind of out of ideas... aside from princess Yuki from the first Naruto movie, that would strengthen the bonds between Konoha and Spring country by having Naruto give her a kid. I'd like to see Hinata and Hana dominate Sakura and Ino, the domination scene was great and I want to see some more light bondage!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would like to suggest these 3 girls:
Tenten(She just needs more love cause Neji SURE as HELL ain't doin it.)
Temari(I know she's not a Konoha-nin but Naruto's dad and her dad could have had an agreement that 1 of their kids would marry each other and I know it's an over-used cliche(SP?) for this pair)
Shizune(Adds a bit of Taboo to it.)
Tenten(She just needs more love cause Neji SURE as HELL ain't doin it.)
Temari(I know she's not a Konoha-nin but Naruto's dad and her dad could have had an agreement that 1 of their kids would marry each other and I know it's an over-used cliche(SP?) for this pair)
Shizune(Adds a bit of Taboo to it.)
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story can't wait for hawt Hana action XD
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The harem's cool :3 In a yaoi lover's POV that'd be helpful for the Uchiha clan too :))
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.
Nice turnabout. I like your idea.
As for suggestions: Well, I think that Hana, Sakura and Ino are set.
So as for suggestions: No 1: Anko Mitarashi
I think she had a similar past as Naruto. As Orochimarus Apprentice and she got abandoned by him, she may have faced a similar treatment, so it would be nice to make something good to her, if you know what I mean.
No 2: Hanabi Hyuga eventually? Well I know that she might be somewhat underage, but she is one of my fave characters. ^^ Ten ten is out of the question imo, since she is with Neji as a matter of fact.
If Hanabi is too young for your taste, maybe Temari instead? But I think she should be with Shikamaru.
So I think if not Hanabi, it should be Shion.
I do not know if you saw the shipuuden movie allready allthough, but these are my suggestions:
1. Hanabi (Yes, I would want her above Anko)
2. Shion, if Hanabi is too young
3. Anko
Nice turnabout. I like your idea.
As for suggestions: Well, I think that Hana, Sakura and Ino are set.
So as for suggestions: No 1: Anko Mitarashi
I think she had a similar past as Naruto. As Orochimarus Apprentice and she got abandoned by him, she may have faced a similar treatment, so it would be nice to make something good to her, if you know what I mean.
No 2: Hanabi Hyuga eventually? Well I know that she might be somewhat underage, but she is one of my fave characters. ^^ Ten ten is out of the question imo, since she is with Neji as a matter of fact.
If Hanabi is too young for your taste, maybe Temari instead? But I think she should be with Shikamaru.
So I think if not Hanabi, it should be Shion.
I do not know if you saw the shipuuden movie allready allthough, but these are my suggestions:
1. Hanabi (Yes, I would want her above Anko)
2. Shion, if Hanabi is too young
3. Anko
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
found the story and loving it. please, please for the love of god please, put Anko in this. I just love her and Naruto together ^_^