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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter update soon.
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good update.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it.... you found my weak spot by throwing a fox merger in there. That just jumped my interest in this thing from a 7 to a 9! While I'm kinda icked on the Tsunande thing (its not so much her age as the fact that she's like a mother figure to him), I definatly enjoyed the chapter! Keep up the good work. ^^
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you add Ten-Ten to this Shes such an interesting charictor... and who dosnt love tomboys
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well.. I havnt worked out all 5 yet, but Im guessing from Tenten's reaction in the first chapter she wont be in it. Which is a realy shame, I like Tenten!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was just right. I thank a lot of detail is a good thing. I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn whoever interupted them, it was just getting good! But Hinata better be Naruto's first, she deserves it!
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. I was hoping the fifth member would be Temari, since Tsunade is pretty damn old, but oh well. Keep it coming.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. Let me guess.
Number one: Hinata
Number two: Sakura
Number three: Tsunade
Number four: Hana Inuzuka
Number five: I would say it will be Ino. Ten Ten is with Neji ^^.
Damn good so far. I'm eager for more.
Number one: Hinata
Number two: Sakura
Number three: Tsunade
Number four: Hana Inuzuka
Number five: I would say it will be Ino. Ten Ten is with Neji ^^.
Damn good so far. I'm eager for more.