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for Somethings Always Wrong

by rxtechgirl

person SJ
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
k....u may not like sasuke so i get if u dont get his character right, no biggie....but Naruto cheating on Hinata like that? not in a million years, not like him at all to do that. and Sakura sleeping with him, knowing that he has a gf? or sleeping with Kakashi? nooo wrong on soo many character levels.
person Jamie
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really wonderful story **Thank you for sharing:(*)
person e
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME!!U NEED 2 FINISH WIND N FIRE 2 WITH SAKURA N ITACHI.........................


I'M WAITING...[taps foot n crosses arm like sonic the hedge-hog)
person gaara89
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAhhhh!!!!! Hinata said yes! I'm so excited!!!!!!!!! Good job as usual, and great job on the lemon. It's good to see a good NaruHina lemon. Nice work, I can't wait for more.


~Reigh~
person gaara89
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job, I'd like to see what happens between SasuSaku and NaruHina. Can't wait!!!!!
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoah what a great story, though you do depictt naruto a bit too selfish for my taste, otherwise this story is absolutely great. I love it! You depict Sakura in a very interesting way, as it is her who initiates most changes in her relationship with Sasuke, while Sasuke is a bit...well, he seems to open-minded about love after all those years where he was trying to burn the bridges, though I suppose that is alright, seeing as it makes Sakura take a more dominant role and shows her to be a much stronger person than she is otherwise depicted. All in all I really like your story and I hoope you will update soon.
P.S.: Don`t forget to clear up the NaruxHina situation, and who gets Sai? (the last one was a joke!!9
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! There married! But but Naruto! You perve! How could you! lol He's a bad bad boy. Awesome chapter! So glad Sakura and the bub are ok.

Sai the emotionless tard what a crack up he is. lol I giggled muchly course I wanted to slap him to but eh thats a part of his charm I think. lol You wanna beat him and yet ya kinda wanna hug him... Or maybe it's just me I dont know. ;)

Anywho egearly awaiting whats gonna happen next. XD

Arcane.
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! Yay! Sakura's pregnant, Temari had a baby girl and Sasuke's happy! Joy!

Aww I kinda feel bad for Naruto once more but like I'm sure i've said before he has Hinata and I realy hope things go well for everyone!

Awesome chapter! Loved it!

Arcane.
person gaara89
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think your writing is getting better and better as the story progresses. I like this story a lot, and I am happy you keep posting! Update soon!
person gaara89
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! Wee! Can't wait for the next one!