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person Anon
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Please continue!!
person Jien
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, update soon XD
person littleolmee
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH Sasuke finally has him, nice interaction. I think something is wrong though, there are weird symbols in the text. Makes it a little difficult to read.
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah! This story is so unique! Ive never read one like it! >< I absolutely love it, please update soon!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto to meet. Great story.
=)
person littleolmee
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens, now they know Naruto is gone but will they be able to do anything to help find him or will they have to wait? Can't wait to see what happens next.
person littleolmee
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, just realized you had switched it so you didn't need to log-in. Thanks, hopefully that will get you some more reviews.
person Dragon7
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I've read 'Alliance of Fire and Wind' this story has similarities but I like your take on the idea. Love to see more from you, keep up the good work. You might consider making it so ayn. reviews can been done, you'd probably get more that way, lol we are all kind of lazy here on the logging-in part.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story can't wait to read more.
=)