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I know I am so late on this review since I read your story on ff.net but I love it. And I thought that it was cool using the idea of two twins with different fathers I've seen this happen in news articles, and even an episode of a series called 'One Born every minutes,a reality involving a hospital and the sector where women have their babies, a black woman had an insemination accidentally with two different donor and had a boy I believe that was black and a girl that was white. So no one can say that the idea is unbelievable to use.

Awesome story just as good as I remember it.

u got me u meanie i was sooooo mad until i read this chap. i really liked it

I must admit that this was a very interesting story with a decent enough plot. Just stumbled across this today and so ended up reading the whole thing. So yeah, this is really good and I'm glad that Naruto found someone to love who wouldn't betray him as well as I'm glad that Sakura, being the bitch that she was throughout the whole story, was barely able to redeem herself in the end. Amusing though that she hesitated and of course the dobe would rush in between the two. Favorite part I think was when Naruto announced to Sakura that she'd be guarding Gaara... I nearly choked on my drink,becuase it was that funny. Meh, good, hope to see more soon. Thanks for a nice read.

omg I was so happy that this updated. I couldn't remember all the details so I had to go back and reread it. still as good as I remembered and the new chapter was really good fit right in with the rest of it. I really hope that you decide to continue it. thank you for not forgetting about it and letting us know.

cuteness. please continue. i really love the story

Its a good chapter, but like you said it is short. You should make naruto give sasuke alot of D-ranked missions since his chakura is sealed. It's just funny thinking of a weakened Sasuke chaseing that cat. Or skip forward.

Yay! You're back!! *does a happy dance*
And NO, this chapter DID NOT suck!! I liked it even though it was short.
I had been waiting for an update for a while now, I was a bit worried that you'd given up on it. So I'm so happy you haven't. Sure, your inspiration might be lacking, but hopefully you'll get it back.
I'm so happy Naruto isn't dead, I got a bit worried there. And yes, I was too stupid to see through it. *grumbles*
Please continue with this fic. I would like to see Itachi dealing with parenthood. Awww...imagine, him wearing hair-slides and pony tails that his daughter has put up while playing with him, or him playing with dolls. *laughs and cooes* Please give him a daughter. That would be so cute.
Anyway...sorry about my ranting..but when it comes to ItaNaru and Itachi, I tend to get like that.
If you need any help with the naming, I believe that the best names for the kids would be those of their parents parents. That is, like Mikoto, Kushina and Minato. Not Fugaku though, because he's an ass. Ahem...again..sorry.. Or names of those close to the parents (Itachi, Naruto and Sasuke) that have passed away, like Jiraiya for example.

These (regular) names are also pretty:

* Amaya - means "night rain" (girl)
* Hiroyuki - means "widespread happiness" (boy)
* Emi - means "smile" (girl)
* Ichiro - means "first son" (boy)
* Emiko - means "smiling child". (girl)
* Kioshi - means "quiet" (boy)
* Megumi - means "blessing" (girl)
* Mamoru - means "protect" (boy)
* Miyuki - means "beautiful happiness" (girl)
* Takeo/Takeshi - means "warrior" (boy)
* Tsukiko - means "moon child" (girl)
* Yuudai - means "great hero" (boy)

I'll be satisfied with whatever you chose, I'm not that pickish, just helpful ;P.

And btw, thanks for making so many awesome ItaNaru fics. I love you. ^^
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

yay the long awaited next chapter ^__^ In all truth I really don't remember when the last chapter was posted, so I really don't know how long it has been
Anywho, not overly surprise that Sasuke is still alive, but can't wait until Itachi makes his life a living hell mwhahaha

holy crap you killed off Naruto ... unless it is Sakura ... but so far it does not seem like this ... great fic so far ^__^