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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you!
Great story!
And CONSTANT updates!
:)
<3
Great story!
And CONSTANT updates!
:)
<3
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story a lot, it reminds me of a soap opera. While the story has an excellent plot there are a few things that are off. One being the few gramatical mistakes throughout the story; however that can be fixed with a beta reader or by just proof reading it a few exra times. The second being the character development. Yes I understand Sakura bashing is a popular sport in fanfiction; however, it is not nesscary. There are ways to play with Sakura's personality without making her out to be a useless bitch. Even if Sakura used a few dirty tricks to get Sasuke, I am sure she would feel some kind of guilt. The thing taht people forget is that she is friends with both Sasuke and Naruto. I personally think if you gave Sakura a guilty conscience you'll be slightly more truthful to the character. And not only that but you'll be giving her some actual character depth and not keeping her as a one dimensinal character. I hope you don't find my comment offensive in anyway; I'm just trying to be helpful and not rude :)
p.s good luck with finals
p.s good luck with finals
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, Saukra, your going to get it so bad! Go to you doom!*mohahaha*
The moment i been waiting for, the rage of Sasuke when he finds out her plan!
Oh glory! And i'm loving it - call me sadistic, but i'm loving it.
Hm, it's really interesting that Kyuubi know that Sasuke was cheating.(God, that word tics me of so bad.)
How, come he didn't tell Naruto? Or...wait, maybe he did? *goes back and read the fic again*
Wonder what will happen to Sasuke and Naruto, I still when them to devoice... And i really can't see Sasuke with Sakura...(oh the HORROR)
But "Big bro" is going to want to take care of his child..IF it is his child. Hell, it maybe Sasuke kid, or both!
ohh, i'm so loving the drama!
I'm all in to this fic, loving it to bit's! <3
You ROCK ON!\^o^/
The moment i been waiting for, the rage of Sasuke when he finds out her plan!
Oh glory! And i'm loving it - call me sadistic, but i'm loving it.
Hm, it's really interesting that Kyuubi know that Sasuke was cheating.(God, that word tics me of so bad.)
How, come he didn't tell Naruto? Or...wait, maybe he did? *goes back and read the fic again*
Wonder what will happen to Sasuke and Naruto, I still when them to devoice... And i really can't see Sasuke with Sakura...(oh the HORROR)
But "Big bro" is going to want to take care of his child..IF it is his child. Hell, it maybe Sasuke kid, or both!
ohh, i'm so loving the drama!
I'm all in to this fic, loving it to bit's! <3
You ROCK ON!\^o^/
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww Pinkie is getting what she deserves *snirk* will this end up Ita/Sasu/Naru?
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't kill Sakura. I think that's the easiest way out for her. I really want her to suffer a long painful life.
I feel really bad for Sasuke now. Although, I still want Naruto to end up w/ Itachi. I hope he does.
Thanks for the quick update.
I feel really bad for Sasuke now. Although, I still want Naruto to end up w/ Itachi. I hope he does.
Thanks for the quick update.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please NO Ita/Naru/Sasu.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....eh!...you didnt answer the main question...or it was just me?...maybe it was me,but if kyuu-chan was blocking sperm(whao,better than a condom^^) but...i dont know,maybe that night was special and he didnt do it? after all naru-chan was saying "bye bye" d.butt head!...oh hell! Itachi for president!(throw confetti) and dont be troubled,you update when you darn well feel like it(girl u put 6 on a row)u rock
ja ne!O/_\O
ja ne!O/_\O
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i love garra helping out
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love revenge stories. Hey, woulnd't Sakura be pregos already. Hasn't it been a year? That would play nicely with the whole revenge theme. ~Thanks for the speedy update!
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I called it quote because I'm quoting your "The other one wqas just saying goodbye" line XD
Very awesome update, Keep it up I love the story :3
Very awesome update, Keep it up I love the story :3