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for Revenge

by Kurokit

person dyessie
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yey!! haha so good. really really good. i never knew that im capable of loving gaara this much. <3 go gaara. haha and itachi is visiting again. what a very nice surprise. Ü i like the turn of events. haha sasuke in this fic rocks. u made him look so tupid. update please <3
person Aeris
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's Itachi-sama's, isn't it? isn't it? *squee* yay Naru-chan!
person Gina
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you! I really do!\^o^/

I hope Naruto is pregnant with Itachi´s love child!!! *hope's, hope's:D*
And sure: Marry Sakura, Sasuke! The Naruto can show you that he can be REALLY happy with Itachi and there - FAR MORE - superior child. I mean come on: The kyuubi and the Sharingan genies. That is a hell of a cool child!

Sakura and Sasuke can live there unlovable marriage and ROT.
Hope Sasuke finds out that Sakura is using him to... they can shear coustety of the child or something. -_-
I don't feel sorry for Him or fore her. I really don't. *am i a bad person that don't?*

But you write this so well...I´m impressed! Usually I don't read M-preg fictions but this is REALLY good!So much drama and I LOVE drama!:D
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! The ItaNaru:ness!!! Yay, Naruto is pregnant with Itachi's child! In your face Sasuke! Hahahahahaaa.. *evil laughter*
(sorry, got a bit carried away..ehum..) It's just keep getting better and better, can't wait until the next chapter's up. *runs around the house being anxious*
This fic is so awesome, I'm so glad you decieded to make it a multichapter fic.
ItaNaru - forever! (sorry for being such a hyperactive nutcase :P)
Take care. Hugs
person a kitsunes light
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was really good!!! Ican't wait to see how naru tells sasuke who is the father and how the story will continue! poor sasuke he muts be feeling like an idiot(wich he is here) after finding out just how wrong he was!
WRITE SOON PLEASE!!!!
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the super fast update! And thank you for explaining what Sasuke was talking about. Please, please let it be Itachi's and not Sasuke's child. Sasuke deserves to suffer knowing that he could've been with his love if he'd been patient. ItaNaru forever! (In this fic at least lol...)
person mihoshi
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, love it. I hope the baby is for Itachi. It would serve Sasuke right the little bastard. I really loved the message Gaara sent Naruto about the pink thing.
person dino1
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who is the daddy? I can't wait for more!
person hpn
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. I love how that ended. In your face!!! lol. It's Itachi's right or Sasuke's I don't care, as long as Naruto ends up being w/ Itachi. I want them to be together so badly. I think it'll hurt even more if that was Sasuke's kid and Naruto is w/ someone else.
PLEASE DON'T LET THE DISGUSTING PINK BITCH WIN. HAVE HER MISCARRY & NEVER HAVE CHILDREN AGAIN OR SOMETHING.
I abso-fucking-lutely love this story. It just got better and better every chapter.
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bet cha it's Itachi's! Update soon please!