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Please make Sakura suffer as much as Sasuke. After all she is having murderous thoughts towards Naruto. Can't wait for Sasuke and Sakura to get what they deserve. Another great chapter.

Oooh I'm actually logged in this time!

*gives you more brownies*

Sasuke is such a stupid bastard. I can't wait for Naruto to leave him for Itachi. I love how Naruto refer's to Itachi as a sex god. It's so true bwahahaha!

I hope Sakura and Sasuke get their just desserts. To think that Sasuke could be hokage?! Yeah right Sakura! Delusional world you are living in.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Good job!

Please don't let this be a story where after all is said and done, Sasuke and Sakura are left alone to do as they please without dealing with the consequences of their actions. Realistically, Naruto has been put through so much hell, mostly because of Sasuke and Sakura over the years, all that loyalty and forgivness is bound to snap at some point. Naruto isn't very realistc personality wise in the anime and manga.

Also, towards the end with Sakura, does that mean that she doesn't know Naruto already knows about her and the duck butt bastard?

what's with Sakura's fantasy??? lol

I'm wondering... kukukuku couldn't your fic be ItaNaruSasu?
hahaha is just that I think it got angsty and the end of this chapter T.T

i like your story so far please continue

Well done making Sasuke and Sakura look bad :3 Love the ending quote too

Wait a minute! you said Naruto can have children! SO WHY is Sasuke leaving him?! Was he paying attention at all?! And WHY isn't Naruto punishing him?! i think Sasuke should be demoted! And given D rank missions! Baka...

Another great chapter. Couple things though: 1) In the first chapter, you mentioned that the moment Sasuke returned to the Konoha, Naruto immediately told him he can become pregnant thanks to the Kyuubi, so why is Sasuke cheating on him? 2) In the second chapter, from Sasuke's POV, he said that even though he's leaving Naruto, he's still claiming him as his. It sounds like despite the fact that Sasuke can find another lover, Naruto can't because he belongs to Sasuke? that doesn't seen right, or fair towards Naruto. Sounds like something that needs to be addressed.

yeeesss.!!! uhmm,. i mean,... nooooooooooo!!! yes and no hahaha. yes! the plan did work! and noo!! how could you sasuke.. well well well, judging by the way sasuke reacted when he saw naruto.. uhmm.. i just wish he will fall to the trick and will eventually kill sakura wiii!! Ü itanaru go! <3 please update soon

i love it! i haven't been interested in a fic for weeks until i read this one. thank god! i thought i lost my love for naruto yaoi...so thank you! hehehehe

please update asap! i'm so excited now!