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by Kurokit

person animelover
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just couldn't stop the smirk from spreading on my face. Wouldn't it just be the bomb if naru breaks up with sasu, itanaru galore, and itachi wins getting sasuke kicked out of the country ... or something like that. hahahaha!

anyway, i luv where this is going and can't wait to see the green-eyed sasuke. i mean, it's totally stupid to cheat on the hokage when you're a peon; talk about brain fart! ;-)

c ya!
person Nikana
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH YES!!! now suffer you over confident worm! yeah! make him pay! and writhe and eat the dust floating off from his brother's nice and evil cloack! and naruto cute hokage robes(muaaahahahaha, that was an evil laugh) take that sasuke-bastard! oh dear author, you make me very happy with this new update ^^ mind you i do not hate sasuke but hey! i like itachi best and if naruto its involved to rubb salt on the wound, then better ^_*
great job, really hope you receive many reviews and make of this a more several shots(speaks lowly...or a twenty chap fic ehem)story
ja ne!^^
person Nikana
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ps: eh! sorry but the idea just hit me...you know? if you make a mpreg out of this and the sweeney bros are involved and both are fu**** Naruto and he gets pregnant....well, how do we know who the father is? i mean come on! they are siblings and they are practically identical(itachi is hotter i know)...oh well dont mind me!!
happy writing^^
person a kitsunes light
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you this a multi chap, I think it is perfect forit! Not an extremely long one, but with a few more chapters, so that we can see what happens with ita/naru with the jealous and ignored sasuke, and to see if naru gets preg with itachi and if he does how they go from there since naru is the hokage
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey is a good story hope you write more chaps
person greywalker999
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You have to continue this! That was too good a revenge not to see Sasuke's reaction to! I totally loved the idea of Naruto getting even with Sasuke instead of just forgiving him like he usually does. I really enjoyed reading this and I do hope you continue to add chapters onto this.
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do i need to beg for another chapter? if so, *Begs*
person Lanie12777
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really, really good! I'd definitely love to see this made into a multi-chapter story(I just love ItaNaru). Looking forward to more(hopefully)!^_^
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, make it a multichapter fic!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love ItaNaru and it's just fics like these that I love the most, and this one has quikly become one of my favorites. The contents of it and your writing has made it an extaordinary story. So PLEASE, write more chapters and make it a mulitchapter fic, and I'll be there all the way reading and reviewing it! SO PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Take care. Hugs
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! Please, please, please with a huge bowl of ramen on top, continue this story and let Naruto end up with Itachi!