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WOW...i couldn't stop reading this story. The last chapter kinda confused me a bit...but i can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey! I think this is my first time reviewing.... well anyways...
I love your story, and the style you write it.
I loved the idea of Naruto pregnant and both Itachi and Sasuke were fathers..it was a first time seeing that.
But to be fully honest... I hated chapter 12.
I hated that you killed Naurto.
It's like you worked us up (had me at the edge of my seat) for most of the chapters....then BAM, killed the main character, then soon to be killing off Sasuke. I literally cried.
What I would have liked to see is how both Itachi and Sasuke would be able to handle a pregnant Naruto, mood swings and weird cravings and all. As well as when the babies are born and how they would be raised....
Well those are my thoughts, no matter how disappointed I am about chapter 12.... I will continue reading it till the end because I like your style.

Take care
-Danya

WHAT?! IS NARUTO DEAD!!!??? NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tell me it isn't true, that would totally destroy the whole story, please don't tell me he died!!! *cries*
Anyway, I can't tell you how glad I am to see that you're back in action ;P I nearly jumped out of joy when I saw that this fic was updated, cause if you haven't noticed it's my absolut favorite one of all fics here at AFF.
I hope that this isn't like the last chapter or something. *making teary puppy-eyes and pleading at Dark_Foxy*
Cause that would make me very sad since this fic is one of my sources to happiness.
Anyway, ignore that if you're confused, and keep up with the good work and I hope you'll update soon.
Good luck with the writing. Take care. Hugs

So...Sakura died using chakra to save Naruto's life, but Naruto is still hospitalized though, so Shikamaru is acting hokage, and Sakura's funeral is attended by many. I think it's nice that you didn't completely bash Sakura. I don't mind Sakura bashing (she's a jerk), but having a story give her a more realistic range of motivations and use her as more than a plot device of EVIL is always an interesting twist. All that purposeful avoidance of gender specific pronouns and Itachi thinking he was at the funeral of a person he hadn't known revealed your plot twist, lol, but still enjoyable. Or who knows, maybe Naruto's dead and there's no plot twist after all. X) Sasuke is kind of the one getting bashed in this fic, now that I think about it. He does stupid act after stupid act and shoots himself in the foot. Repeatedly. I think he's rather lacking the awkward but undeniable charisma his character has in the manga. Poor Sasuke.

Well! ::lets out a deep breath:: Damn... Ok so Sakura died trying to save Naruto. Naruto may still die but he's... in a coma or something? Itachi mentioned a child.... Could it be his child with Naruto? He probably could give a shit about Sasuke's child with Naruto. ... ::nods to self:: Yeah, that sounds about right.

*Awesome* story! Just now read all 12 chapters. Whoa! I'm hooked. Can't wait for your next update. Until then, keep up the great writing. Ja!

Sakura died, but what happened to the baby? PLEASE have her child somehow survive! Last I checked it's NOT the child that is to blame for it's parents's sins/crimes...Does Tsuande know that Sakura's using her chakra to save Naruto would kill her?

NOT

...you know you might get some hate reviews for chapter 12. I'm dearly hoping that it was one of the babies that died and not Naruto. If Naruto did indeed die, then that ending was very anticlimactic and abrupt. I hope you will update the next chapter soon so this confusion may be cleared

No Naruto!!! I can't believe he did that! NOOOO! I hope he's okay. This story is awesome!! I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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