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by Kurokit

schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're so evil! *cries* I want to read more! Naruto and his babies, can't die!!! Please, don't kill them, I beg of you!!!! please!!! *begs on her knees*
This chapter was awesome, this was the moment I had been waiting for and I loved it! Haha..Sasuke-teme..in your face!! XD
But it was a good thing that Naruto saved Itachi, because losing him would have been really painful too. (please don't do that in the future chapters). But I love Naru-chan aswell, so this is painful!
But this chapter was one of the best ones, I'm almost spechless, my hands are shaking, and I...
I can't even describe how much I love this fic, this will always be my favorite fic. So thank you!
Keep up with the good work and good luck!
By the way, don't listen to the other authors that tell you negative stuff, like Elli n Ella for example, because your fics are a lot better than theirs, so don't listen to "the evil people", because we, "the good people", love you!
So take care. And many hugs from me.
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, please don't but it on hold! And you don't have to rewrite it because it's already perfect! I don't want to wait for too long to read my favorite fic...*cries*
person KuroiHato
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright! So many twist it sends chils down my spine....
person animelover
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hiya foxy! i know i've reviewed already, but dang i just loooooooooove this fic. hahahaha! not here to nag for another update, but still chuckling over the pregnancy thing and how kyuubi broke it to naruto. talk about cheeky!

well, hon, gotta bail! so much to read, so little eyesight. later!

madeline.harris@hotmail.com
person Elenea Galad
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue. I want to see Sasuke's reaction to Naruto leaving him for Itachi.
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story please continue
person Damp`
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I despise cliffhangers. But, from an authors P.O.V. I can understand the joy of tormenting your reading. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

-Damp
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought Sakura was supposed to be locked up at the Sasuke's place till the baby was born? and how is having Naruto pregnant with one of Sasuke's babies supposed to punish him? I can't wait for the moment when Sasuke realizes he and Naruto will never be together again.
person HannaFO
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe fight ,fight, fight XD
Sorry... just being silly old me :D
Thank you soo much for this chapter!!!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you are evil!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come right now...*whines*
This chapter was great, oh the drama! But I was a little confused about the "whos baby Naruto is carring" thing...did Kyuubi mean that the twins were all Sasuke's or Itachi's? Or that they had one each, as Naruto told Itachi in the end? *confused*
But I loved it, this is the moment I've been waiting for! The moment were Itachi kicks Sasuke's ass, oh how I'm gonna enjoy that if it happens...(please!!!?)
My fingers are fucking shaking now, while I'm writing this, I'm so excited to read more of it!! And as you might tell from my profile, THIS is my favorite fic on the entire AFF. So congrats, you're the best author and you've got the best fic, according to me (and others I'm sure of it).
So keep up with the good work! Take care. Hugs