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by Kurokit

person Nikana
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! alert!alert! cliffhanger!cliffhanger! evil author at sight! evacuation inmedeatly!(eheheheheh) you evil little creature,how could you?
so good,so OMG! very nice,sandaime was very accurate,he was always a nice old guy!
hope u can update soon, and not make itachi a dead parent as always^^
ja ne!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Never mind that thing about me being confused. I re-read it now, and I get it! One of the children is Sasuke's and the other is Itachi's. Sorry! I can be a bit slow on the uptake somtimes...hehe...*embarrassed*
But anyways, good luck with the writing! Take care. Hugs
person animelover
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah baby! woooooot let the uchiha bashfest begin! and kyuubi is an absolute riot and such a prankster. ya know, we should have a law where infidelity is treated so harshly .. things that make ya go hmmmmmm!


LOL! nice job on this chap! i'm dying to watch sasu get his family jewels bashed in! ITANARU RULES!!!!!
person KitKit
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually it is possible for that to happen ( the two sperm one egg thing)and it's extrememly rare with only one record case. One of the children is a what you call it half female and half male. You can look up, i did.
person HannaFO
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update :D
I like the whole idea with Itachi and Sasuke being the father of only one of the twins :D
And the scrole?! I think i know what it says :D
person viper mix8
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That left me on the edge of my seat! Please update! You really did a wonderful job, but I wouldn't let Sasuke know about Itachi just yet (and make Sakura pay a little bit more XD). I just want to picture his face when he finds out the baby isn't his! The baby isn't his right?
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...it was too short!! Me wanted more!!! *chibi-form of me whining*
But I still loved it, can't wait until Sasuke finds out who Naruto's secret lover is....hahahaha *evil laughter*...that would be soooooo great!!!! In your face Sasuske!!! And hopefully, Sakura will die...I don't like her...Yaoi for life!!
(excuse me for my hyperactive yaoi-ness, but this is ItaNaru so I can't help it! :) )
Hopefully you'll update a bit faster than you did this time, I've been waiting to read it for so long, this is my favorite fic here at AFF!!! (if you don't believe me check my recomended fics on my side, yours is the first one, cause your fic is THE BEST EVER!!!!!)
Maybe I should shut up now.... (T.T)
Take care. Hugs!!!

schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I MISSED YOU AND YOUR STORY!.....yeah.*cough*
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i just wanted to say to all the people that say that this fic
is way OOC, this is a FANFICTION in the yaoi section....yeah i think
the characters are going to be OOC.
i just wanted to say that....and that this is one of the better
ita/naru fics i've read so far. and i have read A LOT of them.
I love it.
person animelover
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nah, don't rewrite this chapter, just move on forward honey chile! LOL! i wanna see what happens when sasuke finds out one of the kids belongs to itachi. yeah, baby, let the angst and the fur flyin' begin! WHEEEE!!!