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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHH! This story seems VERY interersting! I was absolutely giddy when I realized that you put ninja Naruto into the real world. So amusing! I can just tell this story will be great :)
Please update soon! Any chance you can also post this in the Male/Male section?
Please update soon! Any chance you can also post this in the Male/Male section?
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's nice, nice! I like the way you write, and *what* you write too :) Collision is certainly worth continuing :)
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it; i'm wondering though, does that mean sasukes' naruto is in ninja land? Also; do you have a specific semeuke standing here? It was well written, i'm mildly confused, but i suppose that should be expected. please continue!
~Tina
~Tina
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is refreshing please continue the story.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this starts well!! They are both IC, for the respective worlds, and the interaction between Sasuke nad Itachi as well as with Naruto is very believable, I like it very much! I'm curious how you plan to develop the plot, I hope you'll update soon!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be a start to an amazing story..so keep up with the good work! take care. hugs
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I like it! I really hope you do continue, this sounds like it's going to be really interesting so far. Are you planning on the doing the other world, too, where Naruto is going to be stumbling along not able to do anything?