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I really hope this story is continued but I don't know how old this story is.

I love this story so far! I read your Konoha High fic and now this one and I absolutely adore your writing style. If you don't already have people scratching at the door to be your beta, I'd love to beta any and all of your stories. Let me know whether or not you already have someone. My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com. Please put AFF or Beta or something in subject so that I know it isn't spam.

May the yaoi-muse be with you!!
Miranda

I'm so addicted to this! Glad there's an update! So many people want to get a piece of Sasuke. And I like most pairings! My dirty mind is going wild. I feel sorry for the poor kid, though. He's going through a hard time and his brother is being a dick.

I love the way Naruto flaunts how close he is to Sasuke in front of Itachi. It's hilarious. Pwned.

Personally, I'm in full favor of castration for punishment of rape. Rape is, quite possibly, one of the worst things out there that can be done to a person. That said, I have developed this strange addiction to reading stories involving the story. There are so many more emotional levels that go down and are damaged and in need of repair in such stories, don't you agree?

That said, I really loved this chapter. Kakashi is such a tool. I can only assume his excuse will be to Naruto that he only kissed Sasuke to rile him up-- but that jerk is really nothing more than an opportunistic pervert! As always, Itachi is evil. That kiss with Kyuubi though? Omg, that was freaking awesome!!

Keep up the great work! ^^

Oh... my.... I... Love... I... ahhh... -faints-
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OH MY GODS I LOVE THIS STORY SO VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!! xD
This new chapter was FANTASTIC!.... hell! It practically has all my favourite things: protective Shika (and Kakashi, and Gaara, and Naruto, and Sasori xD), vulnerable Sasuke, and so much Kyuubi semxyness! ^________^
I hope he doesn't think that Sasuke was rejecting him =( ......'cause I get the feeling it was FAR from it ^w^
And YAY!!!! >w< Kakashi pecked Sasuke.... on the lips.... -drools- .... bad Kashi-chan, making Naruto jealous on propous xD... and getting personal profit out of it as well ^.^
And belive me, I couldn't stop smiling through all the "I trust you all with my life" little speech Sasuke threw there to the little demons and their happy-hosts =3 Mad-tackling Naruto and blushing Gaara REALLY made my day xD ....hope to see more of this "situations" later on *wink wink, nudge nudge* o.O
Oh, and before finishing, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE LAST WORD. ...."Snap"... Gods I'm STILL shivering with the implications O.O
And in a more lighter note, I'm so GLAD you're back ^______________________________________^ I was SERIOUSLY missing reading your stories ;D
Can't wait to see more! =)
JA NE!
PS: NOW I can give in to the seizure caused by reading this ABSOLUTELY FANTABULOUS chapter!!!!!! (and with very LITTLE chocolate in my sistem) -seizure- xD

hey sorry took so long to review but i was gone 4 the past few days so i copied ur story and printed it to read....I cudn't stop readin i luved the smut scene with Naruto and Sasuke at the park and Sasori was funny as well but so far i luv the story and its plot cant wait to read the rest

Woo hoo! Itachi's obsessive and overprotective anger will now be redirected on to Neji for a while and Naruto and Sasuke will be slightly free-er to develop their relationship! (Although potential rape sets things back, then again, Naruto scores points for the rescue... hmm... thems be some tricky math!) Poor Sasuke. He's just going from one uke cliche to the next! (Not that I care... this story is AWESOME! <3)


Keep up the great work!

WOW!!!
I don't know when, I don't know whom or who, but I hope Neji dies in the worst way possible >D Mwahahaha!
I LOVE this fic! Keep up the great work!

Yay!!!!!!!!! ^_______________________________^

So the furry little tenants were find out! xD And not only by Sasu-chan, but aparently Orochimaru knows about them as well..... gods! The outcomes this could bring ALL sounds de-li-cious! ^w^
Can't wait for the little raven to tell Gaara and Naruto that everything's all right.... I'm sniffing here just thinking about the thoughts those two will have that night T-T Don't let them fall in depression Sasu-chan!!!!

And speaking about Sasu-chan... It was about time he got glomped! *nods* He has been too cute not to, and well, it just HAD to be Kakashi, and in front of Naruto ^.^ Wonder who'll be next xD
Let's just hope that Kashi-chan doesn't get ignored again, God knows what he'll do to Sasu-kun.... But, of course, thinking it better... maybe, just MAYBE, he could get ignored again.... ne? *wink wink, nudge nudge* xD

So, now Sasori will take care of the "blond-menace"... though I'm a little confused abot his role in all of this.... he seems to act a "tinny" bit out of Itachi's plans... wonder if he has plans of his own.... ¬¬
Anyways, Juugo's still beeing a pain and we're getting a deeper insight with Tachi's obsession...
Is it just me, or have his thoughts turned a little more "darker" with each passing chapter? o.O
And what about Pein??!!??!! Gods, these are wheels inside of wheels inside of more wheels.... And I'm a wheel whore! xD No no, seriously, I LOVE what you're doing with this ;D

Oh, and before I forget.... POOR SASU-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm crying here for you baby, I'm crying! Don't let what that girly-man-whore (Neji) did to you ruin your beautiful romance!!!!!! T___________T Besides, If it gets ruined, you'll miss the big kick ass he's sure to recive from a VERY large group of pissed (pervy and/or protective) people!!!! ^w^ So, don't you worry!
*sigh* I just really hope he doesn't shy away from human contact.... what would be of the SMEXYNESS!!!!!!
And speaking of smexyness... wonder if some day Sasuke and Kyuu-chan will have a nice conversation.... and Shuu-kun as well, he's too cute to be let out... and a little homicidal, so... better not forget about him :3

Hope see you soon (be it here, or with that other grandious [and delicious] new story you're making ;D)
Ja nE!!!!

YAAAAAYYY!!!
Good chapter. And for having been in an accident, I have to say that you write very well in such situations...
Kyu and Shuu... HOW SWEEEEEET!!! The little wittle bably demons -coos-!!!
-Now running away to save my life-
I'm sure that by the time you write your next chapter, I'll have lost them.
So, please update soon!!!
And Neji is a real bastard... What's Gaara going to do now? Naruto must have realized that he really likes suke by now...
And Itachi... Well, it he does anything near what Neji did (or tried to do) He's going to have a serious problem on his hands... Well, three. No wait. Five. Two angred demons. Two Raving hosts. And one very very upset raped baby brother...
I wish him, and you good luck!
XD LANE