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Poor Sasuke. Never thought Neji would take it that far. O_o. At least he's okay, well physically, I don't think he's alright in the head now. If Itachi finds out there will be hell to pay, and not just for Neji. Thanks for updating even though life is getting in the way =p

I think the new story idea sounds really cool. Everyone really does need some Sasuke loving.

As for this story, I'm not sure why the hell it doesn't have more reviews! It's fantastic. I'm hardly interested in stories where there isn't sex right off the bat. It has to be good to keep me into it. It's interesting how everyone wants Sasuke. I like possessive Naruto and Itachi. Although I wonder if Sasuke will be getting into any trouble with the other boys? All of them seem so hot XD. I'd like to see him with all of them if only for a night or so because I'm a pervert! And no I'm not asking you to do that, I am just airing my perverted thoughts lol! Me and Kakashi would be best friends. Anyway please continue this story. It's fabulous.

Oh Dear..... *covers heated face with hands*

Have you made it a personal goal to make your readers squeal and drool constantly while reading your fics? 'cause if you have, you're doing a helluva good job ^_____________^

a VERY AWESOME chapter! I tell you! =D

The smut? SEXY..... *thus the drool*
The drama? Hawt! ^w^ Juugo was just what Naru-chan needed to release his possesive side... more of what it already was xD
And Gods! Kyuu-chan was so close to be discovered..... Gods how I want him to be discovered!!!! And Shuka-kun as well! it will make things go SPICY belive it!!! [sorry about the more-than-usual hyperactivness, I've ahave a relatively good day, plus a nice bar of my favourite chocolate, and a big nice steamy cup of capuccino a la Italiana, which has cream, cinammon and more chocolate xD]

So, Orochimaru is in the scene!!!! O.O THAT will surely bring up the DRAMA and TENISON! Can't wait to see what schemes he has planned for our little raven ^.^
And speaking of little ravens... I was wondering, if his relationship with Gaara will develop more in the sentimental aspect (not romantic, just sentimental)... you know, as if they have a nice heart to heart chat, concerninng some of red's past... things like that... that will strenght their bond... and Naru-ckan and Kyuu-chan's jealousy and overprotectivness xD ...and of course, why not, also blow Itachi's top ;D

Anyways, I'm sure that whatever you decide to come up with will have me hooked in the first two lines ^____^
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!!

BTW, about seeing soon.... I REALLY liked the idea about the AU story mentioned in the final author note.... Sounds very... yummy xD If you decide to make it, you have a SURE reader here with me :3
Now yes, see ya!!

I'm for anything that's NaruSasu... although making Sasuke into the ultimate innocent uke just looses all his bastard charm. Its an interesting premise though, I'll give you that.


Excellent chapter. Keep up the good work!

I hope that you aren't trying to tell us that Sasuke isn't the 'epitome of innocence' as you call it in this story. I mean seriously.
But yeah, I like the idea. And I'm wondering what kind of experiments. Although the teacher is rather obvious...

You should really watch/read shipuuden though. It is actually good. Alot better than the first act or whatever yo want to call it.
And in case no one has told you this before, a beta is a person who corrects your work for you. And I'd offer to be yours, but I'm already behind on another story, and personnaly, I think that you don't need one. You make like no mistakes. Seriously, compared to some stories that are filled with typos...

Anyway, I liked the chapter... And I see that Itachi is easing off... And are you going to make karin appear at all, or are you planning on only male acquaintances?
Poor Sasuke... The jealousy is overwhealming him. There was very little Shika in this chapter though... =( So sad.
Oh, and is Sasuke really clueless about Gaara liking him?
Anyway, I can't wait for the next update!
I really love your story. And please put a notice up to say if you've started the other story. I think I'd like to read it.
XD Lane

I'd give you a usefull review, but you write ten times better than I do, so it wouldn't be very usefull...
I thought that Itachi's reaction was a bit unrealistic though. Then again, I guess he couldn't be himself...
And I thought that the narusasu was pretty good. I mean, compared to what I've read, maybe not the best, but not bad. You seemed to be rather worried about that... XD
And you know what? I think I prefer Sasori this way. Besides, the man's a pupet! You can do whatever the heck you want with him!
Not to mention he's dead...
Oh, that's giving me ideas...
I was also surprised that Sasuke was so straightforward, and that he gace into the theory so quickly. I thought that that would take a few more chapters.
Anyway, that's about all that I can say...
Except that I want to know who in the world the two men at the end were, and I hope that you update soon...
XD Lane

So... Good... ^¬^

I guess we can't really blame Sasori-chan for his "little" accident... considering what he saw ^_______^
And Gods! I almost died of mushyness when Naruto, Shika and Gaara were sad about Sasuke ignoring them.... It was a TRUE *awwwwwwwwwwww* moment ^.^
Just like Naruto and Gaara's jealousy time while hearing about Juugo-kun! xD I'm dying to see when he makes his appearence. The potencial drama it could bring... ^w^ I wonder if you'll bring Suigetsu as well.... he is very good Sasuke-molesting material..... xD

So! The plot unfolds! *laughs maddly* What will poor Sasu-chan do now? O.O Maybe go live with.... Gaara? xD gods, I just want to hugh that red-head... and his furry little friend ^__________^ Such a funy pair... when they don't go psycho on you o.O I LOVE it whenever he says that being with the little raven calms him ^w^ So sweet *fangirlish squeal!!*

And Kakashi..... ¬.¬ .... picture of Sasuke sleeping? He sure is going to get a scare if foxy boy (or racoon boy) ever find out about that..... I wonder if his "pervertdar" could have guided him to the ongoing action in the park? o.O I wouldn't be too surprised if it did ^_^'
And speaking of parks.... smexy... very smexy.... *drools* >¬< *drools some more* I can't wait for it to be Sasuke's turn for "exploration" xD

What's Neji's plan!!!! >________< I bet he's going to be a little dissapointed... or sore, depends on how 'naughty' his plan is.... and how close are Naruto and Gaara at that time xD (BTW, I can't wait for Sasuke to discover Kyuu-chan and Shuka-kun's presence ^___________________^)

Hope see you soon! ^,^
Ja nE!!!!

I like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.

haha.. IN YOUR FACE< ITACHI!!!

Looks like all your attempts at murder only caused the two boys to grow closer. Ha!


Although now Sasuke's got his his suspisions seeing as how he recognized the driver of the truck. Itachi better back off a bit and play his cards right if he wants to keep his part in the murder of his parents a secret. Hiring the same truck driver twice is just plain sloppy work. ^^ Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Itachi sounds really angry. I wonder how sasuke would react if Itachi made a move on him...
That would be very interesting to see...
Update soon please!!!
XD lane