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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gods............. o¬o *whips out drool*
This is, oficially, my FAVOURITE chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! [for now ;D]
So smexy! oh gods, the semxyness was too good!!!!!!! [I can't even form coherent thoughts! or words! o.O
*breath in...... breath out....*
Ok, I'm good now... or, as good as I can be after reading this big bundle of amazingness!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....ok, so the breth in-out thing didn't work, sue me xP
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I'm feeling very Gai-like, or even Lee-like *victory-pose* Such youthfullness! I'm squeaking my teeth clean to make the shine effect yeah!!!!! ^__^
Too good, too good.... It's the first time I've rambled *this much* while writting a review.
But well, I guess this shows, as good as anything else, how much I LOVED this chapter!
And the previous, which I didn't have the chance to review, sorry T.T
I particualrly like the importance Gaara's character is having in Sasuke's life (and Sukaku's imput never ceses to make me want to scream *DO IT DAMN IT!!!!* xD]
Can't wait to see what Naruto (and Kyuu-chan) are going to do when they find out about the little racoon ^w^
And of course, to see how said racoon will act on his "desires" (it's still not very clear in which way he wants the "boy" xD). I wonder if he feels at peace around Sasuke? you know, as he said two chapters ago that Sasuke *cares* about him, or as much as someone cares for a person they just met.... but now it's been a week, and going.... mmmhhh... the posibilities.... *drools* ^¬^
Oh well, back to things important.... WHAT A NICE KISS, BELIVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
Hope to see more of those
And of Itachi's jealousy.... though THAT one has been showing for a while =D
Can't wait to see more of this GRAND master PIECE!!! [And of Kisame-san and Sasori-danna, I just love shark-man and puppet-boy ^_____________^]
I'm goint to go and read the chapter again, THAT much it affected me xD
Ja nE!!
This is, oficially, my FAVOURITE chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! [for now ;D]
So smexy! oh gods, the semxyness was too good!!!!!!! [I can't even form coherent thoughts! or words! o.O
*breath in...... breath out....*
Ok, I'm good now... or, as good as I can be after reading this big bundle of amazingness!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....ok, so the breth in-out thing didn't work, sue me xP
^__________________________^
I'm feeling very Gai-like, or even Lee-like *victory-pose* Such youthfullness! I'm squeaking my teeth clean to make the shine effect yeah!!!!! ^__^
Too good, too good.... It's the first time I've rambled *this much* while writting a review.
But well, I guess this shows, as good as anything else, how much I LOVED this chapter!
And the previous, which I didn't have the chance to review, sorry T.T
I particualrly like the importance Gaara's character is having in Sasuke's life (and Sukaku's imput never ceses to make me want to scream *DO IT DAMN IT!!!!* xD]
Can't wait to see what Naruto (and Kyuu-chan) are going to do when they find out about the little racoon ^w^
And of course, to see how said racoon will act on his "desires" (it's still not very clear in which way he wants the "boy" xD). I wonder if he feels at peace around Sasuke? you know, as he said two chapters ago that Sasuke *cares* about him, or as much as someone cares for a person they just met.... but now it's been a week, and going.... mmmhhh... the posibilities.... *drools* ^¬^
Oh well, back to things important.... WHAT A NICE KISS, BELIVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
Hope to see more of those
And of Itachi's jealousy.... though THAT one has been showing for a while =D
Can't wait to see more of this GRAND master PIECE!!! [And of Kisame-san and Sasori-danna, I just love shark-man and puppet-boy ^_____________^]
I'm goint to go and read the chapter again, THAT much it affected me xD
Ja nE!!
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Itachi is freaking scary in this chapter. It kind of makes me think of "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?"...Well if it was "What would you do for Sasuke's love?", Itachi's answer would be "Kill people", which scares me...Poor Naruto, he just isn't having any luck with the people he falls for. Can't wait for the next chapter; keep up the good work!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Diedara will need to call up more than a few favors if he thinks it will be simple to get rid of Naruto now that he's had a taste of Sasuke. I can't wait to read what happens next!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope Naruto can protect himself! ;_; sniff Plz be ok Naruto...
I hope Naruto can protect himself! ;_; sniff Plz be ok Naruto...
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter!
I wonder what Itachi has in mind... He wouldn't try to have Naruto killed would he? Then again, this is Itachi, whether or not it's an AU...
XD Update soon!
I wonder what Itachi has in mind... He wouldn't try to have Naruto killed would he? Then again, this is Itachi, whether or not it's an AU...
XD Update soon!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! Can't wait for the next chapter... I've actually never read a story where everyone is hitting on Sasuke. I've read a few with naruto, but this is better!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha!! Naruto is so fucked right now. hehheheehee. =^^=
(I'm with you totally... SasUKE all the way!! :D) Itachi is going to start planning another murder soon. I can't wait! <3
Keep up the great worK!
(I'm with you totally... SasUKE all the way!! :D) Itachi is going to start planning another murder soon. I can't wait! <3
Keep up the great worK!
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhh....... WOW....... O.O
I liked it... I liked it VERY DAMN MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD
Protective Shika is SO very much cute!!!!!!!! ^____^(almost as cute as Sasuke *.*) I can see some brotherly overprotectiveness between them in the near future =) And Gaara.... oh Gods Gaara...!!! *¬* I can see the attraction turning into a good friendship (maybe even Brother like [I have the theory Gaara always wanted a little bro, you know, him being the youngest and all ^.^]) And of course there is the added bonus of the nice reactions this relationship may hav with Naruto-kun... And Kyuu-chan... just like the one (hot 'n amazing one) we got to see in the end =D
I'm jumping in glee here, I tell you! And squealing my own ears out.... which is all your fault! xP ....and the chocolate bar I ate while reading this fantastic chapter is also to blame .... o.O xD
Chan! haha!
I know I know, I'm rambling... I'll finish now, I swear! ^________________________^
Can't wait to see next chapie!!!
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!!!!!!
I liked it... I liked it VERY DAMN MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD
Protective Shika is SO very much cute!!!!!!!! ^____^(almost as cute as Sasuke *.*) I can see some brotherly overprotectiveness between them in the near future =) And Gaara.... oh Gods Gaara...!!! *¬* I can see the attraction turning into a good friendship (maybe even Brother like [I have the theory Gaara always wanted a little bro, you know, him being the youngest and all ^.^]) And of course there is the added bonus of the nice reactions this relationship may hav with Naruto-kun... And Kyuu-chan... just like the one (hot 'n amazing one) we got to see in the end =D
I'm jumping in glee here, I tell you! And squealing my own ears out.... which is all your fault! xP ....and the chocolate bar I ate while reading this fantastic chapter is also to blame .... o.O xD
Chan! haha!
I know I know, I'm rambling... I'll finish now, I swear! ^________________________^
Can't wait to see next chapie!!!
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!!!!!!