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sweet merciful christ, i went from cloud nine when naru was busy bugging poor kashi, to seering pissed at the audacity of a certain clan heir. tell me somebody hands this kids his own ass, please. as for minato...well, i just love him, no questions asked. i'm so happy you finally updated and i really hope you get another chapter out soon, cause another three month wait and i'll go bonkers. gah, i adore your take on naruto's character, and i'm pretty sure he wouldn't take kindly to getting dominated by anyone but minato. which should stick a potato in that uchiha-brat's tailpipe. the little fucker should be flayed, drawn, quartered and fed to the kyuubi. heh. anger management. oops. i LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, and can't wait for more. and happy birthday to idlesana! i'm reading her fic over on ff.net. makes me laugh. heh. love and peace and blessings! ja ne, Meli-chan.

p.s. has naru met gaara yet in this fic? i can't remember... but this should prove interesting whether or not you have that meeting in mind. just wondering...

Good,very good!!! an update!yay! reconnecting chapter and smooth.I cant wait to see Mr Hokage sama reaction to this little stunt from the crazy duck butt(mind you, Naruto is so not going to tell him muhahaha!)
Anyway,thanks for the update,very worth the wait^^
tke care

Omg. So hot....every chapter was golden. I hadn't ever read a MinaNaru before this. Your writing is amazing. I'm going to be looking out for more chapters from you. ^_^

P.S.: I didn't see any Sasuke bashing. ^_~ Sasuke seemed to act like he would if situations were different.

Wow.... That was HOT! It was also excellently written. I look forward to what you come up with next with much glee and excitement.

X_X-dies from huge amount of blood loss-...........^.^ i just dont know how i could ever live without this story OMG!!!!! it is freakin hot >>i so hope that you finish this story i will die a slow painful death if you dont give me another chapter god im begging you to please put out another chapter or i will........<<>>hunt you down for the next chappie j/k newho i await the next chapter with great anticipation-cries tears of joy-this story is so awesome i mean words alone can not express how great this story is i know i will be doomed the moment this story is finished please email me whenever you update and I am your biggest fan god for a first timer wrinting fanfic you totally do a fantastic job please keep it up i will never be able to live if you dont write XDDDDDDD MinaNaru Rox!!!!!
-Deedeesan Ja,matta(l8trz);3

*dies a happy person* This story is AMAZING!!!

You make it so believable and freaking sexy that one just can't look away! Damn, I love you so much right now random stranger. This fic is just perfect, fabulously well written to the point of sinful X3

I hope you can update soon! And when you do I hope you can email me to let me know? ^^; email: Invisible_Pink_unicorn@live.com

Thanks so much for the awesome story!

do you know how much I freakin' LOVE you?! Huh!? DO YOU!?!? I love you! I love you! I loooove Yoooouuu!! *glomps*

*tears of happiness* oh God.. *wipes blood from her nostrils* I'm so happy...! you UPDATED! *weeps with joy* you're my hero - Such drool-worthy description of a pairing I'm recently obsessed with.. namikaze-slash-cest is soo RARE! And here I have this one, golden nugget that with each new chapter gains additional 3 feet in diameter of pure GOLD! I've saved Your fic onto my HD in case of travel and/or disconnection from the internet, just so that I always have it in the reach of my cursor. I've already read it .. *counts* first chapter 7 times, second 5 and third 2 (to catch anything I could have omitted in my first, frenzied, read). Most - about 99,7% - authors are awful in their leniency in updating, but you.. you don't leave your fans hanging out in the cold, moaning and begging for meager scraps. I admire you and send my deepest thanks. Thank you. Keep up the AMAZING work, as there is no visible drop in quality of the chapters and may health, fortune and Muses favour you.

p.s. I have nine 3 week old puppies from a pair of pure german shepards. I'm going to name one of them with your nick: Shiruy and lavish it with love and kisses :> just so you know how much I love you and your writing ;D

The most delicoius father/son story on the internet! The sexy and lengthy lemons are just amazing.. I love you

OMFG...I can't even tell you how much I love you right now. Sasuke's personality is just how I can see him being with Itachi, and Itachi and naruto??? And KIba made me LOL and then there was TEH SEX. I'm babbling but it's late and I'm so happy I can't help it. I am eagerly, *eagerly* waiting to see where this goes!

Wow! I was awaiting the third chapter with impatience and you didn't disappoint! Hm, is Itachi in love with our little Naru-chan? Ohhh, Minato will have to show a certain competitive streak once he gets wind of this. Naruto can be so clueless; Itachi wouldn't massage someone's hand like he did for no reason. Maybe it's just the pervert in me talking, but a threesome between Itachi, Naruto and Minato would be HOT as Hell, especially when we know of both the elders' possessiveness. (Gah, a Naruto-sandwich...) Though Minato and Naruto are already Hot on their own... *grins*

If you ever receive flames from readers who hate this wonderful incestuous pairing, ignore them and continue this story! It's their own fault for reading it even with the warnings.

Naruto/Minato is SEXY! (And possibly Itachi into the mix is good too!)

Take care and bravo again for the mouth-watering story!
Eternal Cosmos