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Hooray!

I loved Naruto's attempt at writing. I'm actually impressed with the Grammatical simplification and step down in language that you use in Naruto's letter. It stood out against the skill in which the rest of the story is written and felt like a real letter that Naruto might write.

Keep up the good work!

Aww that was so sweet (Sasuke's reaction to the letter). Itachi here reminds me of canon Itachi; taking up the role of the bad guy, while being secretly somewhat of a good guy. I really liked this chapter!

aww...i like how he put his feeling in the envolope its so touching.damn whys sakura still there?its good to know that itachis not with his fathers plan,he has something if its not feelings i dont know what it is but its something plus he cares for his brother theres something there.i think naruto will be happy that sasukes staying at his house while hes gone and doing his job but he may feel guilty knowing that sasuke left his house(cant call that a home).well hope there back together soon.so no tv do they have internet or something or not?hope you can update soon

its been a while sinse i last comented(stupid virus)but yeah i really though sasuke would do more damage yano like destroy fukakus office(bat to the computer launching it into fukakus head) or punch sakura(gold digging bitch).damn,things just dont go the way you want(in life)theres always some variable that screws it up.i dont like mikoto,usually i do but right now she so weak she knows nothing and does nothing she even addresses her son with honorifics.shes so weak it annoys me,i know she prabably has nothing to do with whats happening and does nothing to make it go this way but thats why i dont like her shes the steriotype of women.usually shes got pride and actually thinks,she seems like the kind of mother who only wants her children to be happy no matter what(she even seems sorta like that in the manga but cant do anything there her families ninja but shes not,has no power unless she poisons them).she just need a back bone...sorry for the rant i do really like the story.hope you can update soon

GAH MY NAME AGAIN!!! Well you already know what I think cause I told you when I finished with it so kudos!

Mmm... cookies...

(Actually, damnit, NO! I was just eating my breakfast at work, reading this on my laptop, when COOKIES attacked my will power and WON! 'O_O' I'm all like "mmm, this grapefruit is really tasty." Then BAM!- Out of no where I'm suddenly eating some delicious pretzel shaped Danish Butter cookies from a holiday tin on the table! Totally sideswipped! How did this happen?? Evil...)

Rant aside. Good chapter! ^^ I'm glad Sasuke finally stood up to his father. Thankfully Tsunande and Iruka allowed him to join their family until the boys returned. Will they be allowed to return when they get back? Hmm... That could be an issue.

Keep up the great work! :D

>.<

It's like an espionage thriller. XDDD

*facepalm*

Naruto.is.an.idiot.

So...Naruto had a mask on, the only part of his face Sasuke' could see was his eyes, but the moment Sasuke saw Naruto at the book store he knew it was the guy who broke in...AND NARUTO DIDN'T EVEN DENY IT!?!?!?!?!?

:sigh:

Well, he IS a pretty big moron.

Wha... WAR?! ALREADY?? O_O Omigosh!!

I hope the boys come back ok. All that killing, its gonna take Sasuke some work to bring them back outta their shells. :(
Keep up the great work!! (And happy holidays!)

yay his brothers not a jerk,when you say sakuras spending time at his house what do you mean like sleeping in hid bed the whole creapy deel or what?i dont know why they dont rebel they have the power to kill orochimaru easy,they could get out of this with their hands tied but i guess its the unstable thing huh,pills and all.just think of it as having cancer or diabedies(cant spell to save my live)you take pills on a regualre basis to keep attacks down.but thats just me.hope you can update soon