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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, I only stumbled on this by chance... but .. I sooo want to read more! Will you be updating this anytime soon?..please?
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey! that's a great start!!
is there a chapter 3?
naruto isn't the prince then?
i wonder what sasuke will think when he wakes up between 2 naked men!!!
please continue
is there a chapter 3?
naruto isn't the prince then?
i wonder what sasuke will think when he wakes up between 2 naked men!!!
please continue
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. At first I was hesitant about the whole merman thing but the story really drew me in so I couldn't stop until I got to the end. I would have figured Naruto was the Prince but seeing Kiba acting so ambitious makes it more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next so update soon, please.
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have an interesting take on that old story, it really caught my attention! Also, politics and history - yum!
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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wuooo, this is wonderful idea, the merman and the other stuffs. And you did write it well, keep it up. And the transformation, albeit, gross, it felt mature not too cliché or worth of rolling my eyes.
Chapter 2 is short ne?
Anyhow, ganbatte ne!
PS : When will you be updating this. It sucks when there is no email alert T~T
Chapter 2 is short ne?
Anyhow, ganbatte ne!
PS : When will you be updating this. It sucks when there is no email alert T~T
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Prince Kiba O.O I look forward to more. I like the little mermaid feel of this ^_^
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what you're talking about! That transformation was Awesome!
And I'm loving the story! Shocked me that Kiba's a prince O_O wow
Can't wait to see wait happens! <3
And I'm loving the story! Shocked me that Kiba's a prince O_O wow
Can't wait to see wait happens! <3
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hn, I can't say much about it after reading one chapter but it has potential. So I want to read more, 'cause plot is nice.
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:3
Wow
this is one of the most original fanfictions Ive read! AND its nicely written too! I really dont see any flaws in it, other then the fact that its so horribly short!
So keep up the writing :D
Wow
this is one of the most original fanfictions Ive read! AND its nicely written too! I really dont see any flaws in it, other then the fact that its so horribly short!
So keep up the writing :D
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems like a cool plot, and you really make it work! I could totally read it if you continued, I feel hooked already. ^^
And your writeing is ace, very fluid. :D
And your writeing is ace, very fluid. :D