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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I'm not one for the merpeople scene, but this has started out good. I think you should continue! i would greatly like that! Sides, i'm always up for a good NaruSasu story! ^--^ <3
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What a unique concept! Sure there have been other "merpeople" fics, but this one sounds like it could be something great!! I liked the beginning so far! Your writing style is flawless and engaging! I thought the transformation was awesome! Prefectly detailed! I could practically see it happening in my head! Wonderful so far! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!